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GaZeeBo vs MetaPhysik
o god i just want u to kno that i got mad respect for u but lets go
good luck 10 lines due by 7 eastern time tonight no d/r no crew no feedin no hate blind spit u spit first and god have mercy on my soul good luck bro |
i'll try to meet the time but i have one verse to make against someone else
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Get slapped with twice your reach just watch my rage/
Ignite and have you tasting Spears, like Madonna at the VMA's/ Im subsidin it, plus my gun..im firin it/ And It'll cave ya chest in so far Osama will run and hide in it/ It was good to battle you cuz today i was in need of a laugh/ When you see five straight votes for me then you can be the one do the math/ Im not the person to fuck wit, your luck is diminished/ Your ripley's believe it or not, while i'm up in the guiness/ See i'm like Clemens on the pitcher's mound, i got this under control/ There's no defense aganist my lyrical curve balls... there aimed for your soul/ good luck to you bro explanations: madonna and britney kiss at vma's ripleys believe it or not is a lower record holder thing than guiness guiness is better and more superior and clemens throws curve balls lol again good luck spit at any time just dont prewrite |
nice spit checking into this also...i'll spit in a lil bit it's gonna take a while i have 10 bars to make
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Aight check it
Make you lose your train of thought like forgetting to ride the subway// Like traffic jams, delayed, this dudes gay, like graffiti art, you get sprayed// Gaz dont see himself beating me like kids masturbating blindfolded// Hot spit make you scolded, ya flow couldnt be noticed even it you bold it// Your played out and gay like watching instant replay "play Bi play"// Go away, leave you stuck in ya prime like taking a Youth Foundation survey// Leave Gaz overexcited like kids losing their virginity thrown over ships// Ya fell but didnt slip, thats like having a conversation talking wit no lips// Your not finding a way out like blind terrorists trapped in caves// This kids brave, live on the net, die on the net, is on your tombstone engraved// 3rd bar: play by play..bi..bisexual youth survery is a 3 hour survey that asks kids questions |
aight aight nice drop uppin 1 for votes^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
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GaZeBo
Get slapped with twice your reach just watch my rage/ Ignite and have you tasting Spears, like Madonna at the VMA's/ Dope wordplay Im subsidin it, plus my gun..im firin it/ And It'll cave ya chest in so far Osama will run and hide in it/ ....Ok...not great It was good to battle you cuz today i was in need of a laugh/ When you see five straight votes for me then you can be the one do the math/ Kinda weak... Im not the person to fuck wit, your luck is diminished/ Your ripley's believe it or not, while i'm up in the guiness/ Wordplay... See i'm like Clemens on the pitcher's mound, i got this under control/ There's no defense aganist my lyrical curve balls... there aimed for your soul/ Straight...needs work Ya wordplay was pretty good Punches need work Structure was a lil bit off... Overall 15/20 Metaphysik Aight check it Make you lose your train of thought like forgetting to ride the subway// Like traffic jams, delayed, this dudes gay, like graffiti art, you get sprayed// Wordplay..decent punch Gaz dont see himself beating me like kids masturbating blindfolded// Hot spit make you scolded, ya flow couldnt be noticed even it you bold it// Straight punch...wordplay...flow a lil off Your played out and gay like watching instant replay "play Bi play"// Go away, leave you stuck in ya prime like taking a Youth Foundation survey// Wordplay...decent punch...creative Leave Gaz overexcited like kids losing their virginity thrown over ships// Ya fell but didnt slip, thats like having a conversation talking wit no lips// ...Hmmm...kinda weak Your not finding a way out like blind terrorists trapped in caves// This kids brave, live on the net, die on the net, is on your tombstone engraved// LoL...pretty funny..dope punch Verse was pretty good Punches need ta hit a bit harder Good with tha wordplay Some points were creative Overall 17/20 Metaphysik edged this one.... It was pretty close... But GaZeBo didn't come much with punches Vote-Metaphysik PS...DONT PUT EXPLANATIONS ANYMORE |
aight thanks for the honest vote. at least some people take the time like u did. aight uppin for votes 2 this was a good battle^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
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Opener: Gazeebo ( haha nice line kat hadnt hurd 1 like that in awhile)
Punches: Meta took this because I felt his punches conned better Personals: Tie Flow: Tie Structure: Meta Closer: Meta barely nice by both Close battle but meta took it with punches - 1 Vote gone.. Read new voting rules -Token |
Ok...
Break done.. Fav lines from GaZeeBo.. "Ignite and have you tasting Spears, like Madonna at the VMA's/" Very well structured punch wise..reminded me of a Shakes Speare punch I did awhile back...!! "And It'll cave ya chest in so far Osama will run and hide in it/" Clever Punch decent... I believe you should have come like this threw out the whole battle.. Ok now for.. MetaPhysik..Fav Lines... "Like traffic jams, delayed, this dudes gay, like graffiti art, you get sprayed" Kinda unique scheme nicely done.. "Gaz dont see himself beating me like kids masturbating blindfolded" Was a funny line...was cool... Ok Punches..Meta Creativity..Meta Structure..You both need work.. Flow..edge to Meta.. Gaz...you came hard in the begginning..feel off at the end..Meta was strong threw out... Both keep elevating... Laters... |
gazeebo
Get slapped with twice your reach just watch my rage/ Ignite and have you tasting Spears, like Madonna at the VMA's/ 5/10[/b] Im subsidin it, plus my gun..im firin it/ And It'll cave ya chest in so far Osama will run and hide in it/ 4/10 It was good to battle you cuz today i was in need of a laugh/ When you see five straight votes for me then you can be the one do the math/ 5/10 Im not the person to fuck wit, your luck is diminished/ Your ripley's believe it or not, while i'm up in the guiness/ 4/10 See i'm like Clemens on the pitcher's mound, i got this under control/ There's no defense aganist my lyrical curve balls... there aimed for your soul 6/10 overall 24/50 metaphysik Make you lose your train of thought like forgetting to ride the subway// Like traffic jams, delayed, this dudes gay, like graffiti art, you get sprayed// 6/10 Gaz dont see himself beating me like kids masturbating blindfolded// Hot spit make you scolded, ya flow couldnt be noticed even it you bold it// 7/10 Your played out and gay like watching instant replay "play Bi play"// Go away, leave you stuck in ya prime like taking a Youth Foundation survey// 6/10 Leave Gaz overexcited like kids losing their virginity thrown over ships// Ya fell but didnt slip, thats like having a conversation talking wit no lips// 6/10 Your not finding a way out like blind terrorists trapped in caves// This kids brave, live on the net, die on the net, is on your tombstone engraved// 6/10 overa;; 31/50 meatphysik wins plz drop an honest vote on this http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102931 |
-i didnt like both structures..but i guess meta took that
-flow was close both were alike..so i felt that was close enough to be a tie -word play i felt was for meta..he had some nice lines -but meta edged out it for punches..and it was a good battle but meta just took it in the end with his punches...n wordplay good job my vote META |
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