Deva vs Yahoo Messenger
 

10 lines...
blind drop...
30 mins to put down...

lets do it...jus check in and lets start it....pZ

....check!!

Check I am ready g'luck deva and you dont know who i am :)................................................ .................................................

Like yahoo messenger ima give you an ‘instant’ reply, “I won’t try”!
But you still gonna die, jus like a jap on the bridge over the river kwai!
Ill give ya a Christmas message, look at ya record it’s a ‘Murkin’ disgrace
Ya drop dope like cut glucose, against my pure freebase!
But it aint a race, but ill take it higher than a good amplifier
Ya a poor liar, cos my words are like vodka against weak cider
Can ya tell I like to buzz.. my bars are full of alcohol n powder
Cos I ‘cap’ ya, like 1000 shrooms… leave ya lying needing a doctor…
I know the last bar don’t rhyme, but this battle don’t call for intellect
your 'K4M Messenger’ is the only service that couldn’t ever ‘virally infect’!

drop as soon as...im off to bed...fucked...lol..pZ..... dont take long
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Publicity You dont want it? you wouldnt ever git it
Like return of the king you wont be defeated by man, but by wit//
Reluctant to show full force on this work,Showing your use of vocab
Ryhmes sum made sence but like your interests you refuse to show that//
Yakpak? is that your sn? way to bite off a crew name man
Claimin originality hah right,Git off his dick and become a regular fan//
Unlike sadaam You will not be found, Guy aint straight he cums around
Accusation's false dont connect, Reverse him he likes bondage and is always bound//

i like dat too bad i cant vote

Flow: deva - it went pretty smooth
Punches: deva ( but kinda weak)
Structure: deva
personals: deva
Opener: deva
Multies: deva - she had a few they aint bad
closer: deva

this battle to me wasnt that great but I obviosly give it to Deva

vote on this
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101455

Deva= He Was Better he Smoked this dude another newb vrs vet and didn't need to explain he just had the punches and flow

yahoo=verse was aite but u need to work on ur wordplay and elevate on ur lines so hollaz

uppin[1]............................
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~Flow: Deva
~Multies: Deva
~Opener: Deva
~Finisher: Deva
~Stucture:Deva
~Personals:Deva
~Punchlines: Deva

Vote:Deva (suprisingly..lol)

yeh deva got this yahoo aint no newb(who r u?lol)but deva got this with better flow and harder punches...................................also i liked his dstructure and enjoyed it more.


make sure you repay the favor http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102351 ....now........thx.............pz

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102351 cmon.............................................. ...................................thx............ ....pz

aight deva takes this easily........

flow-not availible in text.........
structure-tie
vocab-deva
multis-deva
metas-tie
wordplay-deva
punches-deva
personals-deva

overall-deva

props to the both of ya, but ima say deva takes this............

yo can u please return the favor?

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102438

much appreciated..........

Deva brought the harder punches...

Some decent, good wordplay and metas...

But his shit was definately stronger than Yahoo's.

Yahoo was just soft, vocab was good, complexity picked up in the last line...

But the punches still weren't "woah".

Deva, for harder shots and better wordplay, specifically.

Holla back on this...