Thankx 4 da Support:2(must peep)
 

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...377#post1031377

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...390#post1031390

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...401#post1031401

Dear Momma
not much changed, bought a chain, got outa da game
of drugs, no more dimes or dubs, love ya, uppin 4 hugz
i hope ya get dis soon, i got ya picture pinned up in my room
i sent my new number wit da letter, i pray it getz through
i cant see goin another day without talkin 2 you, and plus
im late wit da rent money an might have 2 move, but trust
that you'll see ur eldest son in time, tell my boyz i said hi
tell popz dat i forgive him an all da bad bloodz dried
im try'in 2 make it big so you wont have 2 work no more
maybe if i clean up my act wit dis rap shit ul answer da door
when i come around, im jus try'in 2 make u proud cause i adore
da time u workes 3 jobs, protect'in me 4rm da cops
the endless dayz de knocked, 2 cuff me 4 stores i robed
da dramma it never stoped, an 4 a momma it must be hard
tell'in ur eldest son u love him when hes locked behind bars
just wanted u 2 know dat i care 4 u
an threw thick or thin momma ill b der 4 u

4rm ur lovin son-Sims

(roughly based on a letter i sent my mother)
dis was keyed b-4 but got shut down so i pasted it on a new poll
wit betta links 4 Masta-C

Shit was cool it had the Tupac vibe in dat from Dear Mama but it was yo version

^^^werd...........it was an ok drop though.........vocab was ok...........u had some nice multis..........ok punchlines............overall this was an average drop......keep postin and elevatin homie.........

..this topic could never get old..I could sense that you have been influneced by 'Pac'..but..who hasn't..now on your flow..your vocab was alright..your wordplay was average..lacking on multis..other than that..

thankx 4 da feedback
uppin 4 more
peace

yeah while readin it i was like 2 pac all the way and i go down to the posts and everyone else said it to so im not the only one i mean no words or ryhymes were copied so its tight