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BombZ 12-31-03 12:41 AM

Death at ya Door
 
Baron Mynd: ' Second Chance '
S.R: ' Lifestyles '
Echo: ' I'm tired of all of you!! '

Death at ya DooR

Storage of equipped shit that's been shipped packin' weight that weighs more than my whip, as BombZ who stands so strong who's enemies attempt to get rid of his whick, slept with visions of repressed flicks of danger that continues to test my clique, my clique be foul niggahs that'll malest ya' kids, no sympathy on my streets so lord forbid, with swords so morbid leave negative thoughts to make the brave abort it,

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Accordin' to status I bring ya' power to shortage, with strangers exploring the area fucking with the superior, type of fam' who attacks out but will infect your interior,
Affectin' health like maleria, dealing diseases not listed cuz I attend to kill beef please don't fuck up and get me twisted,
Violators who cross paths gets baths of blood, found who's out of district fixed it by returnin' corpses that's been missin',
Death at ya' door I plotted, I'm not bad, just an artist, finishin' beef that this niggah forgot he started..

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Times has changed with evolution new solution to problems with issues spillin' like polution, fuck it, I'll kill it then solve them,
you bring it and I'll clean it, you think its funny? But I mean it, lean it to the side from a bullet released and I seen it,
You cheated, fucking with me while I'm eatin, your forever seating cause I'm beating more than drums, sad endings and odd equals of sums, smashed into nothing more than crumbs,
Lower ya' lungs, you talk but pussies aint ready to spark, you whistle I bark, Death is here, And dawg, I don't knock....

SyaNidal 12-31-03 12:50 AM

yo this shit wus hott i like ya flow nice multies...
pretty good piece subject got acrossed good sounds like you got beef wid somebody...
check out my open mic ' Burnin CD'z '
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BombZ 12-31-03 12:09 PM

uppin for more looks............................................. .................................................. .................................................. ..............

bad dealz 12-31-03 12:56 PM

it's aight

C-TownsFinest5 12-31-03 09:13 PM

yea mane it was good.keep spittin.likin yo shit

Tsar Casm 12-31-03 09:15 PM

^^^didnt you get banned?

Lewd 12-31-03 09:18 PM

it was ok.i liked the mutis,but i just think its hard to read cuz ur structure is so streched.work on that.other than that pretty good.

vote on this.....................



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T lite 01-01-04 12:53 AM

yea nice drop and flow.......keep it up ~1~

young mike 01-01-04 01:25 AM

yo i was feelin this shit it bangin as fuck holla at muh shit
(down 2 ride)

Se7eN 01-01-04 11:54 AM

tha shit was nice dawg, keep that flow shit up

LA_4LYFE 01-01-04 02:43 PM

took me awhile to get through da structure but when
i did it was str8 fire
keep up
peace

BombZ 01-02-04 12:10 AM

UPPIN for some more looks............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .....


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