Evolve
 

realist gave me the idea to make open mics using rb heads names. this is the first one. .

Evolve

the human race's intelligence is starting its carving
imparting upon us, through the ideas of darwin. .
smarting our general knowledge, which follows
. .flowing ideas like a slight breeze in shady hollows
i swallow, my words - hearing the ideas of einstein
revealing a fine line, across what i've heard in my time
cross over the lime light, to pass to another, solved
its clear that we've come a long way since, evolved
im absolved. . of all guilt, no matter whats in question
tech-advanced, yet stupid, nukes government tested
i rest kid, no need to fear me, we only face queries
its eerie what we learn from ancient space theories
mind bleary, but these were people to look up too. .
they passed us on so much, so dont like it, fuck you
evolved since through them, from quills to blue pens
streets made by blueprints, even before we knew it
some went from rags to riches with new inventions
from few pretensions, to the worlds new dimensions
from fewer mentions, you went to new attentions. .
from ancient rome to a bridge with new suspensions
all these things, before unthinkable, now to happen
we went from classical, to pop, and now we're rappin
thats how it happened, and hopefully how it stays
so. . hopefully, we care about evolution nowadays

one: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102684

Nice verse man.

Im feelin the topic and what you're trying to express thru this rhyme.

Nice vocab.I'll say this more like a poem though,then a rap.But it really depends on how you read/rap it.

Nice verse,keep up the good work.

interesting concept and nice slant on it.... makes a change from reading dis's..... a well expressed and put together piece...look forward to hearing the next instalment.....pZ....

..^ I agree..nice piece..everything seemed as it belong there..very good wordplay and vocab..content was excellent..

can i have an actual not one line reply please ?