Tha Hotness VS JadeStar*
 

alright, newbie chick vs newbie chick. 20 lines max, all the usual rules. Good thing is that there cant be any sexist votes up in herre.

ohhhhh and you spit first, deadline.....mmmm 30 mins? or asap---------------------------------------------------------------------

iight i'm goin to bed, i'll send in my rap when i wake up, send urs in and let teh votin start tmr nite

so it's the battle of the girls? Ok, let me break it down real quick
My brother doesn't give me tips, i'm just a real good rhymin chick
so before you jump to conclusions; listen to it while I light you up
as I write this up, i'm igniting up, tell me if this girl's tight or what
I'm not above the level to pack a gun, pull it and take what u got
i'm on the level to make sure that all I see you do is ache when u shot
you need to awake if you thought that i wasn't as tight as my bro
ain't a newbie, but ain't a pro. ain't a virgin but ain't no hoe..........
I would say the same for you but you a rook standin on the corner
you just an immigrant to this. you ain't accustomed; a foreigner...
my rhymes are warmer than yours like I was standin under a light
with that said...I shine. Do I smash girls as well as niggas? i might
scratch that, I do. and proof is you. sorry, but u just aint made it
house will get raided, you'll be faded, not so much a star, but jaded

ummm.....tell me how I did, if you even can do that.............................................. .................................................. .................................................. ....

Before ya start buggin, put ya rhymes together smoother
I'm slashin ya apart more violently than freddy kruger
Hah-PMs bitch, it must be "that time of the month"
You're hysterical, you've gone crazy, claimin this as your "won"
What's wit n' ur bro? You guys got family secrets to hide?
Put you two next to eachother, damn, ya'll worse than bonnie and Clyde
You have no clue of what's goin on, you like a blind-girl in the circus
Mother Goose could have helped ya with ya lines, yet you still wouldn't have the proper-verses

I'm the lyrical killa, wish fullfilla, you won't back down afta this verse i've written, will ya?


iight now my greatest work but let the voting begin

uppin on this................I know i was weak on the opener, but whatever.................................

Yo yo.....this is an HONEST vote....

Hotness... Opener was weak, but you recovered from it in the next verse. Closer was good. You held it down.

JadeSter...Opener was good. After than..."month" and "won" don't rhyme...sorry. Wasn't feelin the line after that......
closer was ok.

Overall: Tha Hotness took this one.

uppin............................................. .....2............................................ ........

wow this battle is like watching a bow-wow lil romeo battle not good but I guess I will give this to Jadestar. Her flow and structure was a lot better and it is easy to read.

WINNER: Jadestar

The hotness vs 1st to wreck and ill vote---------------until then, women vs women battles dont turn me one, especially when her fucken brother is like RIGHT THERE? GOD DAMN LOL

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102633 vote on this battle afta need 100 posts to vote

hotness=his structure was straight punches were aite i liked the flow and shit it was nice
jade=flow was wack stupid punches and sentences were to stretched out........and i didn't like it

vote =hotness both need to elevate but hotness gots more of the rhythym of battling hollaz