Rain
 

Replied to:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101659
And:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=100968

The song is called Rain. I'm just looking for feedback on this track. Tell me everything that is bad about it and everything I can do to improve. Feel free to rape it with your opinion on how sucky I am, just be as specific as possible. Thank you.

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/1/atraludiomusic.htm