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chaci 12-31-03 01:21 PM

you can touch it
 
You can touch it
If after you gone suck it then fuck it
But when you finish bitch don't be expecting no duckets
Cause I'am a pimp
Never pay a chicken to pluck it
Bust two or three nuts then I hop in my bucket
These bitch made niggas done fucked up the game
Geeked these hoes heads up now they feel they got game
All these hoes fantasy about is money and fame
But I ain't giving up shit it's that simple and plain
I ain't about drama/I just want cash
I ain't about saving hoes/I just want ass
I ain't about slowing up/I move to fast
SO if you slowing up you betta step on the gas
YOU can touch it bitch
GO head and fuck it bitch
Might as well suck it hoe

Antonio Banderas 12-31-03 01:25 PM

Aiight man....

Seriously, ya gotta use a lot of better vocab.... Peeps posted verses like this millions of times..... Just relax and think of all the deep shit that goes on in your life and let your emotions out in your writings..... honestly, this gets about a 1.3/10, but U can improve easily....

Menik 12-31-03 02:05 PM

You need to leave 3 links or 3 names of people you left feedback to or this will get closed, Thanks.

Penskills 12-31-03 04:00 PM

..this is garbage..what more can I say???...

Echo 12-31-03 04:05 PM

this is too simple, the concept was kinda lame to. we have all heard the pimp's story. try to come up with a new idea


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