Corrupted Visions: I Don't Matter
 

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Everything that I had is just not what it seems to be now…
Cause you flee out of my life and from me you see frowns…
Cause apparently I wasn’t good enough for you I’m just shit…
And all of these tears I cried made my heart become rusted…
I trusted you but what you did wasn’t justice it was selfish…
My eyes Swell with tears but all I can think is farewell bitch…
But I fell with…all of my heart but you did not care for me…
I cried cause I thought you loved me but it’s a unfair story…
And I bear poorly all this pain that my heart just takes…
Cause its hard to wake alone I just wanna depart this ache…

Cause I Don’t Matter To You…
Never Did, Never Will, So Fuck You…
I Trust You And You Break Me In Two…
Cause I Don’t Matter To You…
Never Have, Never Would, So Fuck You…
I Loved You And You Rip My Heart Too…

You just laughed at me when I tried to speak with you…
And walked away just smiling at me…as he kissed you…
You didn’t care how I feel now I fill with so much hatred…
I just wanna make it…go away but this is how I take it…
Cause you make me feel like shit like I’m just nothing…
You show no loving…that’s why I’m here just cussing…
Cause I actually thought we had something that was real…
But I lack the feel of your love, but as facts revealed…
I started to see how you truly are from the inside out…
Making me wanna cry out as I feel like I wanna die now…

Cause I Don’t Matter To You…
Never Did, Never Will, So Fuck You…
I Trust You And You Break Me In Two…
Cause I Don’t Matter To You…
Never Have, Never Would, So Fuck You…
I Loved You And You Rip My Heart Too…

The things you said to me I thought they were real but no…
Im sealed shut hoe cause your acting like a real slut though…
By saying things to seduce my mind with the truth behind…
All your lies, but you being a bitch, I didn’t choose that crime…
Cause I honestly just didn’t fucking exist in your world…
Choosing him over me, that player already has four girls…
I just don’t see what your problem is…you’re a dumb bitch…
And some shit cant be healed so with you I’m done with…
But this whole time you made my heart get splattered you see…
So fuck you bitch now you just don’t fucking matter to me…

ok but need some work on thr rymin i did see any hooks or words that came close to rymin most the time keep workin

This was a good piece here man....real emotionaly drop....you always seem to drop emotional pieces lol....you had nice multies through out the piece....Petey needs to take a lesson in multies..lol wtf is he saying about it didnt rhyme lol fucking dumbass....but it did rhyme nicely and you structured it good, your chorus was alright overall it was a good read....keep up the good work

really emotional.. i wonder, is this a true story, if it is, then you know yourself what to do..people like that don't deserve you..you aim higher boy!

and if its not a true story, man, you have one spot on imagination..described it as it is, keeping in all the good factors of a dope open mic..and the kid who dissed this, yeah, i'd blame in on too much New Year alcohol...

keep it up

this was very good. everything was perfect. i really liked the chorus, it was awsome.

i was feeling that shit it was mad nice the shit you said was banging holla

shit's a lil too emotional. i like that. i can relate to that. it appears that someone's been tapping into my love life. haha just kiddin ,
keep it up

real emotional......nice i liked it.....the chourus tho.....wasnt really feelin it but it wasnt bad.....keep droppin ~1~

not my type of shit but for what it is it was good and the hook was pretty good too flow was smooth
u had the emotin too so keep the shit up son


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got plenty of feeling into it...but then you do alot of these sorts so.... rhyming was a bit off... but the content was nice.scheme ok structure good..hook..dunno...but overall not my thing but decent none the less....pZ....

This Was A Very Well Done Song. It Had A Nice Steady Structure. A Good Sence Of Emotion. Your Chorus Seemed Really Simple. To The Point But Basic. I Think You Could Fix It But Also In Text Things Sound different Then In Audio If This Was To Be Actually Put To A Higher Level. But All In All You Repped Your Crew Very Good.

Great Piece Masta C.

If You Have Time Can You Leave Some Feed Back On Something In My Sig. Thanks.

Emotion Emotion Emotion it made me Cry :'(...LoL jokes man it was still deep and ya Made it Work......ya Strucutre is Nice like it is normally and It works with ya Flow Style which Is Also Always Good....Ya Mutlis Is Awesome Like In every Piece ya Help me with them....so all and all i liked this piece Deep but still good.....PeacE.....

Dope peace...
Good topic
Pretty emotional...
i'd rate it .... 7.5/10

Props to ....
Everyone who went into this..
Unless it was just Masta C