ILLunatic v.s Adebisi
 

I'm bored as fuck.....


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10 lines
Adebisi drop first
No feeding
No biteing
No recycling
No stretching
No crew votes
No hate votes
No d/r votes


Good Luck......

Remember kids... Record mean shit... Peep the Chiefs...
I got a mean streak and soon you will to... in ya briefs...
You aint shit... never was... let me make shit clear...
This kids fucking garbage.. like his dad did to bring him here...
Punk you aint dope... we all know.... so quit frontin.....
Ya verses always rexembe ya custom text... they're there but sayin nothin
Underestimate the new kid... But shit this aint close....
I hope you have metafore's since you'll never see five votes....
Kids lonely... and know naming ya hand to say ya score with a girl...
And if Illness has arrived... Lets hope its terminal...

mmmhmm....DOPE......
I'll key up soon...........
Nice verse tho............
Props homie...............

Thanks

Shit i'm just gonna drop tomorrow
Dont worry i will not no show
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Damnit
I wanted a battle within 30 min.
Was supposed to be a blind spit.
Just post.

I laught at the rhymes you be spittin, cuz i kno they be pre-writtin
Who you be shittin, Ya shit couldn't be seen twice if it was copy-writtin
I spit bricks like boulders, Ya couldn't be dope if canibus crew on ya shoulders
I rip tha script & undocument ya folders, ya couldn't be hot if ya bathed in Folgers
Ya punches are defenseless, Steppin ta me ya loss is preventless
I'll make ya senseless, Ya done blazed before i finished this sentence
I spit in conviction, My punches hit 1 after another in contradiction
Retaliatory eviction, obivous prediction, losses come to you like a cocaine addiction
This was ya first cross and ya recieved ya first loss, ya loss shines in gloss
My punches hit in full contact like playin Lacrosse, how do you feel after ya brutal loss

^Not bad

Votes

UPPIN FOR VOTES #1
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Vote...

( 40% ) Punches --
( 25% ) Flow --
( 15% ) Multies --
( 05% ) Structure
( 05% ) Vocab

lol sorry fucked up^

Vote...

( 25% ) Punches -- Even
( 20% ) Flow -- Ad
( 15% ) Personals -- Ad
( 10% ) Structure -- Ad
( 10% ) Vocab -- ILL
( 10% ) Originality -- Ad
( 10% ) Multies -- ILL


Both these verses came hard, some lines by both cats were played. I think ILL could have won this if he had of structured his verse better, he had some good punches, but they resulted in strecthed bars.
I think that Ad took this with good simple but hard hitting punches, better flow and structure...

My Vote = Ad

pce homies

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Hmmmm.....
Didn't kno that Adebisi was TOX
Fuckin Alias's..............................
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Punches -- ad
Flow -- Ad
Personals -- Ad
Structure -- Ad
Vocab -- Ill
Multies -- Ill

Vote: Ad

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Ya have to Copy B-Kast.............
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