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critical say keep em comin so thats what ima do/
spit this sadistic shit that'll lay out ya crew/
its been known ta uncover tha pussy in ya crew
and ive been known ta bring out the bitch in you/
step at me see if ima juss let that shit slide/
naw ima slice ya throat and make it look like suicide/
do or die thats what u should be askin yaself/
cuz my dawgs make moves real slick wit no slealth/
its juss tha means we got ta survive in dis life/
so ya think its really worth losin ya life/
"puck it" like "kirby" i mean fucc it you aint worthy/
ta take up anymo' of my time while you on my mind,
Im trynna grind and spit some sadistic shit like brains
blown outta they mind/
for tha others who want it juss come holla at me/
til then ima kick up back wit ma crew like its maui/


lil verse i did on anotha site...holla back wit opinions plz.........


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101649

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...519#post1035519

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...525#post1035525

it was good keep at it make it longer hit up my down to ride

yo that was pretty good.keep it up.

this was pretty weak..........vocab was basic.........rhyme scheme was pretty wack.......multies were basic........wordplay was basic.......overall this was a pretty weak drop........keep postin and elevatin homie.......

kinda basic....and i wasnt feelin da begining when u rhymed da same shit twice......but its ok...whats doesnt kill u makes u stronger .....so jus keep elevatin
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