Product of the Slums
 

Damani-DaGrinch - tryin to get signed
Termz - I remember
Kosha fo Passova - keepin it kosha
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Yea this is just somethin I whipped up when I was in a shitty
mood as u can probly tell lol it may make sense to u or not
I jus wrote whatever wanted to come out and be written
peace ~1~


Years of pain and tears,cements yo brain into a ruthless frame of mind/
Heart goes cold as you grow old from watchin fuckin babies die/
So its no wonder why.....now I get high wit no remorse or sorry thoughts when I see a corpse/
The original source of pain is now the force....that drives me to split niggaz like divorce/
Mind becomes a dark place,a nutcase, all yo good thoughts are erased/
Now I do and embrace,the very sick shit that used to hurt me in the first place/
Childrens smiles or childrens cries.....slowly it makes no diffrence to me anymore/
Now its all the same,cause poverty has corrupted my brain to its very core/
3rd world starvation,little girls is aids patients....shit is twistin me beyond reckognition/
It affects me less and less as I watch and listen,wars,cancer and plane collisions/
No longer a disturbence or something sick, just a common sight and regular shit/
Poisoning me and spreading through my body like cancer till I finally submit/
So here I am no longer a man,just a soulless mass in human form/
Couldnt take the shit no more so finally........... I have fully transformed............

Ya all these killaz,thugs and drug dealez......just a product of their enviroment
The slums and projects is a jungle.......so what else could it produce but animals........

Verse 2

Now look at the monster I've become.....and its only getting worse/
U can see verse by verse,the spirit of my lyrics only gets more perverse/
NOW try reading my mind.....you need a flashlight to find anything in the darkness/
And if great art comes from great pain,then I'll have no problem being an artist/
A twisted jungle of veins and insane thoughts...combined wit extreme inteligence/
The Projects have educated me,and I see the world for what it really is ever-since/
Thats the product,of guns,drugs,AK's and kids catchin strays/
Used to duck slugs wit luck......now I wouldnt give a fuck where I spray/
Catch a body wit the shotty.....Id be a fuckin liar if I said I was sorry/
Cause projects and wars produce more animals then a fuckin safari/
So If Im stalkin at night and catch u walkin,yo ass better take flight/
Cause I wont hesitate to strike.....and leave u bleedin under the streetlights/
No more soul only out for dough, my heart has become blacker then-coals/
Packin chrome roamin the sewer systems,snatchin victims thru manholes/
Knowing one day its my turn to lay.....in my own blood and guts, decomposing/
The door to hell is wide open and the door to heaven has long since started closing/
I absorbed my saroundings,.....the botomless pit opend I slipped and I fell/
For all the people who made my change possible...........I'll see you cowards in hell.............


Outro: yea we blame the thugs and dealerz who tryin to survive
but we should be blamin the people who made them
U aint born an evil person.......evil is created

Aight drop-Buti hatethat hood shit....lol......get better topic....aight vocab-aight multiess...aight drop ............

Keep droppin

^ Word.

The topic itself was fucking gay. At times the flow in this was off to me because the lines were too long syllable-wise, but you seemed to have an understanding of what you wanted to say, and got it across quite well .. the multie's came together nice as i read, it could of used internals to tighten it flow wise i guess .. but the content wasn't bad, nothing great, but it wasn't bad.

You've got the potential there.

exactly i wasnt feelin muhc of it

baryn howdu get a millino post..
wow...wud admin gave em to u..

damn...thats tite..u must be the pst leader..

i no u didnt post 6000 things..

an who did u beat for ya 2 wins

even though the topic was played my man Jezus still brought forth the gospel.....
good flow and allright multis....but it was more about what u said then how u said it on dis 1.....
if u dont feel dis shit than u didnt grow up livin broke...

u wanna batle or no bitch


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yo i aint feelin dis at all u know...didnt really get into tha flow or nuttin....i liked some of tha words u came out wit, but it was like too long u know....
"Couldnt take the shit no more so finally........... I have fully transformed...."
dat was a nice line u know

wasnt really feeling this at all.. try a new topic this was a boring read. sorry

he gets it casue he can relate.......... and and about the flow i understand how it fucked u up but it was made to be spit kinda fast so u know for me casue i know how i spit it, its good but ya i get where ya comin from....thanx for the feedback.~1~