still rhyming with Wonder
 

ima rap sensation, she tha dancing queen,
she love tha money, love the honey, love tha funny, love the green
rolled up on her, "How u get all dat in dat jean",
she said find out, damn i love it when they keen
asked her age, she just turned nineteen,
back in my room its me myself and irene,
oh shit wrong girl, sorry it was christine,
dressed to impress, saying places where she been,
both got smoked, i was feeling kinda lean,
things got naughty, if u gettin what i mean,
bouncing on me like her private trampoline,
coffee drinking, stimulated from caffiene,
she was...kissin, caressin, shaking startin to scream,
she was...moaning, groaning shaking starting to cream,
flicked on tha nicks, on my wall mounted screen,
picked up her nicks, like there was nothng i aint seen

Go and follow the rules ok ..

Else i must close this..

@ ur verse: back in my room its me myself and irene,
oh shit wrong girl, sorry it was christine, Lmao..!!

But check the rules tread and follow them .. = )

Merry happy new year..

hey ive given feedback to 3 people when i posted my first thread...does this mean i have to give feedback on another 3 for this one? or can i just put them links from tha others on here?

and cheers for the comment

yeh these are 3 feedbacks

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...092#post1036092
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...094#post1036094
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...099#post1036099

Every open mic u drop , u need to leave 3 fresh feedbacks to others..