Eyez of a Young Nigga
 

kinda keystyled dis just wanted 2 try sumthin new if yall dont like it I'll go back 2 da original
but dis is like da same exact style as my 1st joint "holla at cha boi"


Replied 2:
Remember our Love ( Full Rap ) - High Class
At the swimming pool...[Keystyle] - PaYce
It's Her N Me. . - FormulaMC

(Verse 1)
this nigga is kinda lookin beyond those bad times in life
Good Ol Dayz are coming no mo mad rhymes no knief
no mo yelling & no mo Brutal punches to a nigga's face
now its just plans and taking lunches in different places
1 little brother that looks up to me & hataz that mug me
a Christian Mother thats dumb but caring who bugs me
may not have cute eyez, but to tha ladies I bring smiles
tha next day I see these bamma niggaz rockin my style
but never rocking it as better as Young J did yesterday
dont wanna go outside cold weather dont like my way
to many bammaz and to many new people so its a no
niggaz ask for a Blind Date 2 cuz I'm cool with tha hos
I see a Young N' Beautiful lady that I'm trying to get wit
but a nigga'z shyness & highness makes a nigga quit
my Pimp Juice aint no longer wet its feelin its dryness
on summer vacation in da desert absorbin food minus
a lot of people who I loved that walked in and out of me
Jasmine H. who changed me from a bitch nigga to a G
I was once lost and saw strangers but now we're cool
I see my favorite cuzin as a comedian actin like a fool
and her twin going far wit her smooth and deep poetry
A Past Memory...this phatty gurl that tried to go wit me
so I denied it so I saw her staring at me right after that
I'll only shut my eyez foreva if tha tha big man chooses
but for now wit my high elevation 4 me theres no loses
Eyez of a Young Nigga

That is some hot ass shit captain. Structure was good and the wordplay was emaculate. keep up that good shit and i don't know what ya other style is but u should stick wit dat shit

Holla At Em

yeah this was alright i thought....your structure in this was good....the flow was alright, it stayed on through out the piece i thought, didnt really get off.....you had some alright vocab....but overall this was alright....and keep at it.

thanx uppin!

uppin still

lol had a little mistake but uppin come on yall

Pretty good piece, the structure and the flow was on point very well, some okie vocab and some nice details good work man keep it up

Flow Was On-Point. . Much Props For That, Made For An Easy Read. . Nice Content, Vocab Was Good, Jus Everything Was Good Man. . Tryin' Not To Be Repetitive. . Keep Um Droppin'.

thanx
uppin

good flow and multis n shit man.. this renminded me of tupacs styule on the real u must be feelin em... really ncie job here man keep that shit up.. peace

holla

thanx uppin

sleep!

damn dis is on da 2nd page?

its all good keep it up