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LockZ `Vs` J-durable
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Sorry for fraff manz...you got 30 mins to write something against me...dont take long!!...safe..
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Use My ~Mics Blast~ To destroy Jdurables Image ~light Fast~ You Good The answers No ~Why Ask~/
Tic-Tack I use phrases simple AZ-That to blow your ASS-BACK to a wack emcee site yea www.ItzLikeThat.com/ Not A single Individual wishes to read your Long-Lasting Mind-Numbing ~prose~/ ~Worst~ is imma beat you and I chose to go 24 hours ~first~/ That dosent stop me from proceeding 2 ~Burst~ Open each line in your ~Verse~ with out the assistance of a single ~curse~/ Like an emergency room patient ill leave you in seek the help of a ~nurse~/ My Lines Explode Like Fire ~Works~ Uppercut you wit punches so hard u woulda went to heaven but skipped out on ~church~/ SO you Drop Back Down fatally hit the ~ground~ ur name demolishes from the earth without a single ~sound~/ No body misses you or even wished you were even ~around~ Except me with these bars I use your body and continue to ~pound~/ You Drop a verse-and-ppl-start-to-~FROWN~ When Ppl talk about the rap game being good with talented ppl you turn there opinions ~around~/ |
Yo you messin wit a C-R-A crooked letter to da Y //
Put yo head between yo legs and kiss yo ass goodbye // Messin wit me dogg you cant be muthafuckin serious // up inside yo dumb ass head things must be goin delirous // You aint gonna win dogg you rhyme like a bitch // Im like a roll of toilet paper i was made for diss shit // Best recognize you fuckin wit J-durable da daygo kid // last nigga dat took dat rode lost fuck his wig // dats right my rhymes kill so lockz you best behave // or yo homies will be pourin' 40's on yo fuckin grave // Yo rhymes too anixous you bitch needs to relax // be a man,grow a penis, and lose da tampax // admit you suck,im da shit,my rhymes way mo' legit // if my game was a wack as yours id drop da mic and quit // |
Overall lockz took this one, although it was pretty close. J's rhymes were too simple, and he had no multis at all, plus the punches were weak for both of you ( not saying im any better) I can't poll vote but My vote is for Lockz.
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yo while i think about it can ya'll vote on this please http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...42&pagenumber=2
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what mic you gotta be kidding me.J-durable killed him.that punch line bout the tampax finished him off.lockz was aight but J-durable just came out harder. If I could vote i'd pick J-durable.
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Damn right big bully.I felt i did betta den him,but he did have some good shit.It will probably be a close one if anybody votes.
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Structure-J
Flow-Tie Wordplay-Neither Punches-J Multies-Neither Creativity-Neither Ya'll both need to work on ya punches J ya structure is weak... but its better than LockZ Ya need to bring your shit together That structure you got now... we used like 3 months ago LockZ ya need to unstretch ya barz Hit harder with punches Vote-J-Durable |
Ah ... fuck... Its not lettin me poll vote
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Structure :J
Flow :Tie Wordplay: none Punches: J Multies-none Punches win battles so.....Vote: J Durable both need to elevate and expand vocab Vote on this shit http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103093 |
my vote goes to J Doub cuz punches do win battles and Lockz had no punches. J Doub got locks wit that tampax and was off to the races wit a win. that one punch put lockz in his mutha fuck'n grave.
Vote: J-Durable P.S. I want to battle this bitch... BIGBULLY! |
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