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Jay B Vs JustinKredible33
6 Lines... Max
Due Today Post Links And Whatnot... |
LOL@ BITING MY OLD NICK.............................................. .................................................. ..........just with a k
Justin-credible the fuck? |
yo checkin in.....................................
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nigguh, ill have this bitch made nigguh Jay B flea when my gunz shown//
im gunna send this dude back where hes from; the unknown// i got the mack and all, beat u in a sec wit these shots that im dissin// aint talkin basketball when i give this guy a "tech" and his "shots" are still missin// now listen Inversry; quit free postin, ill bag u like groceries// u couldnt get bit off if ya ass was fresh poultry// |
thats 6 uppin for ur verse yo...................
.................................................. .............. .................................................. .............. .................................................. .............. .................................................. ............. Inversry i never hurd of ya daug i diddnt bite off shit i got the idea from a old wrestler from WCW and thats prolly where u got it from MARK ASS BITCH, quit free postin. Q: real quick how u got almost 1700 post and a record of 0-0???? u couldnt be copied off if u was a zerox machine... |
theres a 10 line minimum yo................................................ .................................................. ..............
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six lines max "yo" read the fuckin rules and quit free postin punk asses.......................
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Just Check This Real Quick.... 6 Lines...
..Ill Bust And Slice Ya 'Flesh-Open'.. Like Kids Being Blazed With 'Fire-And-Flames'..|| ..Like Burning Notebooks My 'Text-Is-Smokin'.. Ya Don't Express Ya Alias So 'Retire-Ya-Name'..|| ..Ya Can't Overcome Me If Ya 'Quote-My-Lines'.. Ya Not Speakin Like I Striked Ya 'Throat-With-Nines'..|| ..My Verse = Straight Illness An Peeps Will 'Vote-On-Mine'.. Ya Can't Advance If Ya 'Coat-Ya-Rhymes'..|| ..This Faggot 'Sticks-To-Balls' Like A 'Baller'.. And If BasketBall Is Rapping Hes Not 'Making-This-Shot'..|| ..Like Hobo's Boxin This Was A 'Quick-Brawl'.. Ill Jab Ya With Knifes And Have Ya 'Aching-In-Spots'..|| Something Quick... To Rip This Kid... Personals... He Says Hes A Baller... |
tyte verse yo uppin
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Jay b got this in all categories , eeeeeeeeeeeenuff said.
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..This Faggot 'Sticks-To-Balls' Like A 'Baller'.. And If BasketBall Is Rapping Hes Not 'Making-This-Shot'..||
..Like Hobo's Boxin This Was A 'Quick-Brawl'.. Ill Jab Ya With Knifes And Have Ya 'Aching-In-Spots'..|| yep this line killed it gotta give this 2 JB |
gotta give this to JB his shit hit harder and had better rhymes, Justin your shit was good but i have to go for JB on this
drop some honest vots on my battles peace |
Justin:
Flow - ur flow was really good it was betta than Jay B... ur structure was pretty good aswell Punches - u didn't have that many... but the ones u had didn't really hit hard... aint talkin basketball when i give this guy a "tech" and his "shots" are still missin// that was sorta weak... Personals - i would say ur personals were pretty good hit pretty hard... one of ur best points in dis battle... now listen Inversry; quit free postin, ill bag u like groceries// u couldnt get bit off if ya ass was fresh poultry// those were good personals... Vocab - i would say u got average vocab... cuz the words u used were pretty basic Originality - i would say 2 or 3 of ur lines were original the others were pretty basic, but played out good... overall 7.5/10 begining and end: yo started strong and ended strong but the main probublem was that there wern't enough punchlines and the ones u had didn't hit hard enough... also in the middle u fell apart but then at the end u pulled it 2 gether... Jay B: Flow - i would say ur ryhmes flowed but not as good as justin's... structure was good aswell but try 2 make ur words ryhme more... Punches - almost every line had a punchline that would knock justin off his feet... this was by far ur best point in the battle... ..This Faggot 'Sticks-To-Balls' Like A 'Baller'.. And If BasketBall Is Rapping Hes Not 'Making-This-Shot'..|| ..Like Hobo's Boxin This Was A 'Quick-Brawl'.. Ill Jab Ya With Knifes And Have Ya 'Aching-In-Spots'..|| those were ur best punchlines and they hit really hard... Personals - had a couple but just like ur punchlines hit increadably hard... especially ..Ya Can't Overcome Me If Ya 'Quote-My-Lines'.. Ya Not Speakin Like I Striked Ya 'Throat-With-Nines'..|| ..My Verse = Straight Illness An Peeps Will 'Vote-On-Mine'.. Ya Can't Advance If Ya 'Coat-Ya-Rhymes'..|| Vocab - vocab was pretty complex... ur usage of words was pretty good... but some times a couple of ur words didn't ryhme... Originality - most of ur lines were original around 4-5 of them were... and all of which were well played out... overall 9/10 Begging and End: Started strong and stayed strong though out... Winner: Jay B because he had more punchlines and personals and all of them hit alot harder... i thought this line won him the battle... ..Ya Can't Overcome Me If Ya 'Quote-My-Lines'.. Ya Not Speakin Like I Striked Ya 'Throat-With-Nines'..|| also he had a much more complex vocab |
wow we got mad unexplained votes
justin nice flow and thats about it u need 2 work on ur vocab personals didnt c many multis and evening out ur lines overall an ok verse but need elevation good flow punches personals and structure u simply out did justin u could work on ur vocab and more personals though |
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