{A Glimpse} Part One.
 

You'll Never Understand Me Fully. . Glimpse. . Peak. . My Life. .

I Grew Up, With A Mother N Half A Dad
That's Like, Buyin' A Pound N Only Gettin Half A Bag
See Dad Had Mood Swings, Like Banner To The Hulk Quick
But Mom Was Incredible, N The Streets Taught Me Hammers N Bricks
Dad Was Punchin' The Clock, So I Was Lunchin' On Rocks
Slangin' N Bangin', Tryna Become Something I'm Not
Life Wasn't A Spectacular Factor To Me
Q-P, I'm Steppin' Backwards, Rapper. . I'll Be One See
That's What I Told My Family - Formula's Famous
But The Smokin' Was Shameless, Dealer Shall Remain Nameless
Not In The Game Unless - My Act Is Fuckin' Clean
Back To Spleen, I'm Hungry G. . N Infact I'm Mean
Got This Short Temper From Pops, My Name Drops, Snap
Never A Sport Winner. . Pissed When I Lose N I Can't Counter Act
I Have My Nack, Lines N Rhymes Stacked, A Picture Painted
Want A Girl, The Liquar's Fainted, Damn My Figure's Tainted
Had To Question The Significance Of My Exsistance
But All Problems Were Solved Due To My Crews Upliftment
Now Notice The Differences Between A Real Experience
And A Tounge-In-Cheek Story Just Told For Dividends

{Hook}
Only A Glimpse. . You Gettin' Only A Glimpse
Into My Life, My Strife, Yeah I Been Through Shit
Take This Journey, You Heard Me ?, MuFuckin' Listen
N Pay Attention As You Witness My Life Through Writtens

My Brother Was My Homie, Dog, He My Damn Companion
Said To Be The Champion, You Gotta Be Demandin'
So I Was, Gimmie A Mic, Beat, Lines N I'm Good
But Gimmie A Pipe, O-Z Of Weed, Some Knives N I'm Hood
So Now I'm Like Pops, Flippin My Personality
Grippin' Onto A Fantasy, It's Rap Fuckas, Battle Me
My Pen Creates, Then Dictates Facts I Need To Punctuate
Childhood With A Dinner Plate, But Now The Paper Fluctuates
Down Though, Now Dough, Ain't Easy To Obtain
My Brain's Pain'll Puncture A Membrane, I'm Insane
Unable To Maintain A Positive Mind Frame, Not The Same
Uncooperative Game, Dogs Told Me To Push My Name
Some Said Push It Quietly To This Half-Rock Society
But I Pushed It Riotly, Jus For Notariety. . Hire Me. .
'Cause I'ma Get My Destiny Fufilled. . Blessin' Me Still
Is A Supportin' Cast Of Cooridinate Points From My Past
A Once Insubordinate Task, Finally Broke Through At Last
Red Light. . Blue Light
Mama N Dad's After My Ass. .

{Hook}

Jus A Glimpse Man. . Patiently Wait N You'll Get The Second Glimpse. . Peak. . My Life. .

REPLIED TO :
Echo - Late Night Show With Greg - Special Guest Echo
PaYce - Toliet Paper {Keystyle}
Too Easy - Same Girl, Different Feelin'

Yea. . Atleast Two Parts To This Piece. . 2nd Part Later. . Feedback Appreciated Pz.

dis was an iight piece I liked da me n her joint betta
anywayz
vocab was good...good flow
good multis
keep droppin
7.5/10
peep my "Eyez of a Young Nigga" iight?
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Yeah this was a good piece here......i enjoyed the read....your structure in this was pretty good......i liked the multies they were good....you had good flow in this i thought, it stayed on through out the piece, it never really got off in this....you had a good hook i thought as well...vocab in this was nice....but overall a good piece...keep at it.

excellent punches. this was an awsome piece. i was feeling it. i liked ur line about only getting half a bag. was really good. nice work.

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