Triskut*REBOOT* verses Antonio Banderas
 

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*Mic Check* Wow...hot mic here...gotta real hot mic.

Yo Yo Yo, mexicans cant rap
So all your shit is just crap
Why dont you go eat a taco
Cause you cant rhyme for shit, Paco
Buy me a chinchilla
And maybe i wont kill ya
Do not make me smite you
For i have a +2 Broad Sword of Shamu
Look at me, im on fire
You better go cruise in your low rider
Hows your Pentium Processor?
Its as slow as your father, the cross dressor
Just sit your ass down
Ima beat you so bad, your gonna look like a clown
So what now you dirty mexican?
Ill cut you ese

Gloyven

Dude, for real I was debating if I should post or no show, but I'll battle U...... Checkin in................................................ ............................................

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I can tell by your lightweight status, u cant throw heavy punch
I'll break his foundation, verse crumbles..Spine already crunched
U can Cannabus ta edit ur work..U'll still be merked...
U've probalby bitten that shit, ur posting discredited work...
Ur unknown from birth.. I make ya disappear...U've been unearth
Ur flow is disfunctional like having to eat threw a straw
Why ya even accept battles, ya cant even return a call?
(post a good verse get it battle call) :)
U speech is appauled...ur screens still unheard like wolf cries
Since ya verse BACKfires, ya intak heat from the rear like gay guys
Ur made to wine, ya cant post correct like ya gotta a crazed mind


My verse was wak, but I think it was enough hopefully.....

Uppin for votes....

Actual punches, wordplay utilized, format tight...

All from Antonio.

Reboot needs to look at how others rhyme...

Then go from there.

No wordplay, weak, childish punches from him.

Watch and learn from others who have been doing it for a while.

Cuz ya format and content kinda shows no clue.

But ya here, and that's a start.

Peace

Holla back...

upping #1 for some more expained votes.... If U vote here, we will return the favor and honestly vote on your battle............................................ ..........................................

Basically what Born To Kill said... Antonio took every catergory...
Better punches, wordplay, vocab etc....
Reboot, try and make the bars a bit longer, match 'em up etc... just check other peeps work throughout the board...

Vote - Antonio Banderas

Carsons lacked something in my eyes tho.. maybe the overall structure did something but I was feelin' Diverse's alot more - The finisher was real nice... kinda a perfect closer... not a major hit as such but a great bar to end sh.it if you get me.. Carson's was similar in that way, kinda an anti-climax style finisher with real impact but it was outdone slightly...
C's personals were nice, but presented differently hindering the impact.. Diverse had some good wordplay, and each bar complimented the next really....
Overall a killer battle, pretty close, but in the end...

Vote - Diverse

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^^ Man... I fu.cked that up again... copy n paste bullsh.it..... sorry....

Basically what Born To Kill said... Antonio took every catergory...
Better punches, wordplay, vocab etc....
Reboot, try and make the bars a bit longer, match 'em up etc... just check other peeps work throughout the board...

Vote - Antonio Banderas

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Heres the low down on ur battle:

Triskut*REBOOT* that was awful!! u had no structure, flow, punches or wordplay at ALL!!

Antonio Banderas takes every catagory!!

T*r* u need 2 elevate quick or get out lol!!

antonio merkd um he had better flows, better wordplay, and harder punches.... decent battle..........

hit dis one up plz.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104979

antonio took this one easily...he came with decent punches, personals and a nicely structured verse....reboot, just follow everyones advice, watch others and you will learn in due time...work on your punchlines and make your verses more complex.....keep elevating......

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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104256

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damn as much as i hate to say this i think that triskut really took this battle

no shit.. antonio banderas you underestimated this dude you should have come harder than that

triskuts verse just seemed like a freestlye to me.. but he dissed the hell out of you on that

"Hows your Pentium Processor?
Its as slow as your father, the cross dressor"

antonio banderas you really had no hard disses in this battle man.. your shit was filler mostly