Dialect OTYP v\\//s black out
 

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I terminate ur existance do u like pussy and eat our ur sentences
keep ur distance or face the consiquensis
did u bite or something cuz u acting suspicous
do your self a favor and excape this brawl
in mah book whackness is illegal and u just violated the law
leavn you hug-gats so it would be best to duck attacks
dawg u preeschool cant u be all grown up..... like the rug-rats
when you testing me u come up short like bisectomies
this like a science experiment cuz i disected this mc

i cant spit right now so when one of my battles close i will checkin then spit srry why did you post this anyway i never agrred to this did i?********************************************

toss gas on my body, ignite a match and throw it, still you cant burn me/
im takin this bitch out now, and son im'a do it in a hurry//
i burry you deep in piles of lyrics/
i mus gon def cuz kid you screamin verses but i cant hear it//
mus be ya words are invisible cuz son i cant feel um/
sharp words like knives and like cards im bout ta deal um//
you might beat other kats but you wont beat me-tho/
i leave ya dead body stinkin up da basement, now thats b.o.//*black out*
this kid spitin crap, dam son, gots one wack-mouth/
my verbs ull shut down ya system so you can realy *black out*//
dawg you mus be rappin at *ghosts* cuz every time you spit i hear *booin*/
how you say i prewrote a battle i aint even know i was doin//
my words are slugs dat ripe up ya face, make dem meds wrap you like mummy/
*when you challenge me to a battle you supposed ta wait till i except dumby*//7
not jus got set up threads like back in the day when i'd be settin up shop/
my verse is like a *bungie cord* cuz when i got you on the spot,* i make you drop*//
i make it pop till you heart stop and me walk away not even mangled barly/
you steady spittin shit like you dun ate sum ones dingle berry//
i got amazin lyrics wit ill word play that ull stun yo/
you couldnt be *fly* if you had ears like *dumbo*//

aight srry took so long but there it is get some votes

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geez. this was bad, but i spose dialect gets it...
better flow, and punches. work on multis and the rest...

vote: dialect

peep this shit and close it for me...

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many thanks... piece

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yea dialect did this dude

black out shoulda came harder and spent some time on his verse

easy to tell that dialect put sumthin into his shit

vote:dialect

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and plz hit dis audio battle me vs "it"
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=10383

thnx to all voter

o' and would sum one tell me how to become a registered voter

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kings overview

opener- dialect
flow- dialect
punches- dialect
metas- ???
personals-???
structure- dialect

dialect merked um

vote dialect

vote DIALECT!!

He had a better flow/ structure and his punches hit alot harder!!

Black out wasnt bad but still needs 2 elevate and get his structure worked out

Dialect- Some clever punches in there, pretty good flow and nice personals

Blackout- Almost no real punches all together a weak verse

OVERALL- Dialect took this easy with a more complex and clever battle verse

I took time on your battle please take some on mine

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=105293
Thanks

L's breakdown:

punches - dialect
personals - dialect
flow - dialect
creativity - dialect
opener - tie
closer - dialect

OVERALL - dialect