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Nephew J vs RYTHYM 212
aight man im'a type it up here quick yo.
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Aight, here's my ten lines, wish I had more but that's fine whore//
Just hear tha lyrics I implore, hardcore throwin you on tha floor// I'm lyrical-insane causin' you lyrical-pain, shit I'ma kill and thats real// You see me creepin RHYTHM 2-1-2, see you blew up as I errupt// Your rythym is goin korupt, you shoulda ducked out, you bout nothin// I'm comin and I'm showin you somethin, you fake and these lyrics I make// What's it take to shake you off, I bust a smirnoff bottle on yo dome// Decapitate you, put you head on a chrome platter, give it to yo dad// Shit, hes mad, fuck it, I'll kill all you kinfolk when I burst like tha Incredible Hulk// You all gone, so bitch on you I piss and aint nobody goin to miss ya// |
half ya shit didnt even rhyme..not a punch was thrown
simple rhyme scheme like tryin to rhyme dad wit dome i could kill ya wit too lines, just another dumb fuck kid surround ya wit bullet proof glass, u would still get hit "May all the real thugz RIP", nah you aint real, u wack cant kill me,im ya uncle...u dead nephew for talin back tryin to kick box wit god....... ....you a star? well my rhymes is leavin you sunned Try ya style: not-rhyming-words, u wack bitch// ...For that ya life is Done Explainations "May all the real thugz RIP", nah you aint real, u wack cant kill me,im ya uncle...u dead nephew for talin back ^^ His Sig says May all the real thugz RIP ^^ His name is Nephew J...nephew - uncle [2] tryin to kick box wit god....... ....you a star? well my rhymes is leavin you sunned Try ya style: not-rhyming-words, u wack bitch// ^^ In his profile it says he kick boxes ^^ He uses --- between some of his words and he uses // |
dumb-bitch, tha shit aint gotta rhyjme at tha end of each line, and im realer, ill kill ya with a tiller but naw anyways yall ppl drop some votes on this shit hear
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^^ yo sway again ill come on my real name and actually try
i aint no fuckin newbie...dont act like i dont know what im talkin bout |
Wow do i need to break this down???? Y u fuckin wid these little kids. Fuck it..
Punches-212 Personals-212 Flow-J Wordplay-212 Meta's-212 Creativity-212 Multi's-212 Overall-212 took this by everything. ~1~ Vote DQd... Read voting rules -Token |
vote nephew
no explanation needed well its cuz he punched better and flow nicer rhym you need work man lots of work seriously go work on ure spelling first though Vote gone.. Please see the new voting rules -Token |
Ok break down...
Nephew J Wow elevated my man...Some times you had a rhyme scheme...then during your flow it just died out...poor structure and no punches.... RHYTHM 212 You atleast had some schemes and punches... " could kill ya wit too lines, just another dumb fuck kid surround ya wit bullet proof glass, u would still get hit" Was a good enough line to take him,.....and you literally killed him with two lines lol...no hate... Nephew J....fam just try to get a better rhyme scheme and hard hitting punches....stay battling... Vote:RHYTHM 212 Please return the fav and poll vote on this link.. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=98441 |
opener- 212
closer-212 punches-212 multis-212 flow-j sturucture-212 personals-212 metas-212 overall-212 easily Vote gone.. Please, See new voting rules -Token |
sorry ^ that was me................................................ ...............................................
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Thanks Emerge, at least you dont throw dickridin votes out like all thesse other people in here!!!!!
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Nephew J
Aight, here's my ten lines, wish I had more but that's fine whore// Just hear tha lyrics I implore, hardcore throwin you on tha floor// I'm lyrical-insane causin' you lyrical-pain, shit I'ma kill and thats real// You see me creepin RHYTHM 2-1-2, see you blew up as I errupt// Your rythym is goin korupt, you shoulda ducked out, you bout nothin// I'm comin and I'm showin you somethin, you fake and these lyrics I make// What's it take to shake you off, I bust a smirnoff bottle on yo dome// Decapitate you, put you head on a chrome platter, give it to yo dad// Shit, hes mad, fuck it, I'll kill all you kinfolk when I burst like tha Incredible Hulk// You all gone, so bitch on you I piss and aint nobody goin to miss ya// Punches didn't seem to hit hard Good structure.. could use a lil work Flow was goin good...someparts sucked ass tho Wordplay....ya need it Personals....get more Elevate some.... Overall........12/20 RHYTHM 212 half ya shit didnt even rhyme..not a punch was thrown simple rhyme scheme like tryin to rhyme dad wit dome i could kill ya wit too lines, just another dumb fuck kid surround ya wit bullet proof glass, u would still get hit "May all the real thugz RIP", nah you aint real, u wack cant kill me,im ya uncle...u dead nephew for talin back tryin to kick box wit god....... ....you a star? well my rhymes is leavin you sunned Try ya style: not-rhyming-words, u wack bitch// ...For that ya life is Done Punches were decently hard Wordplay wasn't that great Personals...not many Flow...good.. Creativity....straight... Overall....14/20 I thought RHYTHM took this simply because His punches hit harder And it all flowed well.... Vote-RHYTHM 212 |
^^ emerge is my friend
i told him i was fuckin around wit newbies so he came and voted against me for no reason and i told you i aint a noob stop actin like ya tough...i murked u wit a 1 min key and wit no effort |
WHAT CELESTAL? YOU MUST BE TRIPPIN DAWG CAUSE I SPIT REAL AND AM HARDER THAN YOU, SO DON'T TRIP YO, AIGHT
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Potent Prospect = Me
Emerge = FRapRhyme Potent Prospect: ill check ya votes in a sec FRapRhyme: lmao FRapRhyme: im gay :-( Potent Prospect: really Potent Prospect: expose my alias or some shit Potent Prospect: illl go see FRapRhyme: naw ill just act like ure n00b Potent Prospect: ok good Potent Prospect: fag Potent Prospect: lol FRapRhyme: lol Potent Prospect: damn yo...you voted against me Potent Prospect: whyyyy FRapRhyme: i dont know Potent Prospect: now i have to go get it removed FRapRhyme: im stupid:-( Potent Prospect: fag FRapRhyme: just call me a dr Potent Prospect: ok i will FRapRhyme: no more gay battles that you fuck around wit noobs FRapRhyme: ever no matter what FRapRhyme: or ill just vote against you again and sway like i did Potent Prospect: lol Potent Prospect: why FRapRhyme: cuz gay battles are gay Potent Prospect: lol Potent Prospect: u voted on it Potent Prospect: lol Potent Prospect: nephew J said this Potent Prospect: Thanks Emerge, at least you dont throw dickridin votes out like all thesse other people in here!!!!! FRapRhyme: lmao Potent Prospect: i need one more vote FRapRhyme: maybe he won FRapRhyme: i didnt read that gay shit Potent Prospect: lmao |
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