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Divine Remedy 01-02-04 05:26 PM

RHYTHM 212 vs Lyrikal Killa
 
10 lines...you spit first

5votes
no dk
no crew
no hate

Emerge cant vote

lol

Lyrikal Killa 01-02-04 05:40 PM

Hoe Moe Flow, You Whuddup Joe
Spittin Sneakly Dekie, Your Mama Is Freaky
Ur Poppa Is Sneaky & Ur Sister Eats My Tweakie
I Fly So High Like Superman,So Die Now Jay- Z Fan
Your Gay, Inifinity Times Two, Stupid Slu
Fo, I Smack Your Whack Tract's To Trippin Tracks
Slacks Are Silvery Smooth, Suckity Suck Suck Suck
I Bit, Indite Slight Fights Wit Great Mite To Enlight
You Fake Fuckin HomoSexual Wannabe Thug
I Hit You Wit My Louisville Slug.

Eat Dat. Hoe. Moe.

Divine Remedy 01-02-04 05:56 PM

Murk wit eas....
Only time u blazed up is when u payed fo trees
And like alias death, hoe this was plane to sea
This guy cant rap..i would kill him wit two lines
But This verse would get dq'd.....
.... and than that fag wont die
Right now ya already dead..dont need to go on
Dumb as fuck - callin me joe so i guess ill call u john
Lyrically rapin u...even though its played its true
Mine as well call me a fortune teller....
...cuz this verse is verbal voodoo
We standin eye to eye, u then show ya real fear
Cuz You moving weight....
...is like pushing fat joe ina wheel chair

ILLunatic 01-02-04 06:02 PM

Lyrikal Killa

Hoe Moe Flow, You Whuddup Joe
Spittin Sneakly Dekie, Your Mama Is Freaky
Ur Poppa Is Sneaky & Ur Sister Eats My Tweakie
I Fly So High Like Superman,So Die Now Jay- Z Fan
Your Gay, Inifinity Times Two, Stupid Slu
Fo, I Smack Your Whack Tract's To Trippin Tracks
Slacks Are Silvery Smooth, Suckity Suck Suck Suck
I Bit, Indite Slight Fights Wit Great Mite To Enlight
You Fake Fuckin HomoSexual Wannabe Thug
I Hit You Wit My Louisville Slug.


Ok... this sucked ass
Ya need to elevate on Wordplay, Vocab, Structure, Punches, Personals
Shit.. you need to elevate on everything....Sorry kid...
Just bein straight honest with you
Overall 3/20




RHYTHM 212

Murk wit eas....
Only time u blazed up is when u payed fo trees
And like alias death, hoe this was plane to sea
This guy cant rap..i would kill him wit two lines
But This verse would get dq'd.....
.... and than that fag wont die
Right now ya already dead..dont need to go on
Dumb as fuck - callin me joe so i guess ill call u john
Lyrically rapin u...even though its played its true
Mine as well call me a fortune teller....
...cuz this verse is verbal voodoo
We standin eye to eye, u then show ya real fear
Cuz You moving weight....
...is like pushing fat joe ina wheel chair


[b]Lol...Needs some elevation in places
Flow was a lil choppy
Punches were decent
Structure needs help
Overall.....11/20


Vote-RHYTHM 212

Simply because i thought he came harder with punches
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South Paw 01-02-04 06:02 PM

fuck this was a landslide

lol a nigga cant even belive this shit











hahahahahhahah

what the fuck is up with this battle















rhythm sucks a fucking dick!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Murk wit eas....
Only time u blazed up is when u payed fo trees
And like alias death, hoe this was plane to sea

/\gay

Slacks Are Silvery Smooth, Suckity Suck Suck Suck
I Bit, Indite Slight Fights Wit Great Mite To Enlight

/\genius











vote killa for being a hot dunny and being tight

TRIBAL 01-02-04 06:08 PM

lyrikal killa

Hoe Moe Flow, You Whuddup Joe
Spittin Sneakly Dekie, Your Mama Is Freaky
Ur Poppa Is Sneaky & Ur Sister Eats My Tweakie
I Fly So High Like Superman,So Die Now Jay- Z Fan
Your Gay, Inifinity Times Two, Stupid Slu
Fo, I Smack Your Whack Tract's To Trippin Tracks
Slacks Are Silvery Smooth, Suckity Suck Suck Suck
I Bit, Indite Slight Fights Wit Great Mite To Enlight
You Fake Fuckin HomoSexual Wannabe Thug
I Hit You Wit My Louisville Slug.

Eat Dat. Hoe. Moe.

weak very weak played out played out gay jokes nothing really stood out you need elevatin


RHYTHM 212

Murk wit eas....
Only time u blazed up is when u payed fo trees
And like alias death, hoe this was plane to sea
This guy cant rap..i would kill him wit two lines
But This verse would get dq'd.....
.... and than that fag wont die
Right now ya already dead..dont need to go on
Dumb as fuck - callin me joe so i guess ill call u john
Lyrically rapin u...even though its played its true
Mine as well call me a fortune teller....
...cuz this verse is verbal voodoo
We standin eye to eye, u then show ya real fear
Cuz You moving weight....
...is like pushing fat joe ina wheel chair


well also weak but between the two this dawg take it with harder pounches better opener and closer like its been said you need work on structure work on it and your ryhme would flow better

overall vote rhythm

hit the battles in my sig i took the the time

peace

Divine Remedy 01-02-04 06:18 PM

this is funny...lol

uppin............................................. .............

uppin............................................. .....

tribal your gon be my next murkin....

just cuz u think i suck so u talkin shit

Tsar Casm 01-02-04 06:18 PM

I WON !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!

Roots 01-02-04 06:19 PM

V=Rhtyme
cos he knew how to throw a punch the other guy did not....
and he came weak what the fuck ? hoe moe joe? get the fuck out of rb kid.

Lyrikal Killa 01-02-04 06:19 PM

everyone thinks I am serious lol...this is hott..uppin for 100 character gay ass rule fool..................

FuE-xIoN 01-02-04 06:26 PM

Man Lyrikal Killa Ripped This Battle Apart, He Had Sick Ass Wordplay And Dope Vocabulary With Some Hard Hitting Punches....

Hoe Moe Flow, You Whuddup Joe
Spittin Sneakly Dekie, Your Mama Is Freaky
^Sick Multis, Flow, And Personal (Mama Line)
9/10

Ur Poppa Is Sneaky & Ur Sister Eats My Tweakie
I Fly So High Like Superman,So Die Now Jay- Z Fan
Just Straight Ill, Its Like You Didnt Rhyme For A Reason
7.5/10

Your Gay, Inifinity Times Two, Stupid Slu
Fo, I Smack Your Whack Tract's To Trippin Tracks
Slacks Are Silvery Smooth, Suckity Suck Suck Suck
LMFAO @ Suckity Line, Pure Dopeness....Nice Line
8/10

I Bit, Indite Slight Fights Wit Great Mite To Enlight
You Fake Fuckin HomoSexual Wannabe Thug
I Hit You Wit My Louisville Slug.
^Ill Vocabulary And Straight Swinging Punches From Left To Right Best Line In Your Verse
10/10

No Need To Breakdown Rhythm's Verse It Was Straight Wack Its Easy To Say Lyrikal Killed This Kid

South Paw 01-02-04 06:26 PM

nigga you suck i just bmkered you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

dough hostile 01-02-04 06:47 PM

Lyrikal Killa

Hoe Moe Flow, You Whuddup Joe
Spittin Sneakly Dekie, Your Mama Is Freaky
Ur Poppa Is Sneaky & Ur Sister Eats My Tweakie
I Fly So High Like Superman,So Die Now Jay- Z Fan
Your Gay, Inifinity Times Two, Stupid Slu
Fo, I Smack Your Whack Tract's To Trippin Tracks
Slacks Are Silvery Smooth, Suckity Suck Suck Suck
I Bit, Indite Slight Fights Wit Great Mite To Enlight
You Fake Fuckin HomoSexual Wannabe Thug
I Hit You Wit My Louisville Slug.

Everything sucked.
Loser



RHYTHM 212

Murk wit eas....
Only time u blazed up is when u payed fo trees
And like alias death, hoe this was plane to sea
This guy cant rap..i would kill him wit two lines
But This verse would get dq'd.....
.... and than that fag wont die
Right now ya already dead..dont need to go on
Dumb as fuck - callin me joe so i guess ill call u john
Lyrically rapin u...even though its played its true
Mine as well call me a fortune teller....
...cuz this verse is verbal voodoo
We standin eye to eye, u then show ya real fear
Cuz You moving weight....
...is like pushing fat joe ina wheel chair


Flow was a lil choppy
Punches were decent
Structure needs help
Winner

whitelightning 01-02-04 06:50 PM

hey dough...you wanna back up your vote slut..I will battle yo ass..you don't gotta chance....step up...

The Jett 01-02-04 06:57 PM

what the fuck is this garbage......(killa)flo mo ho joe ro ya boat?-
^^just stop that gay garbage....omfg-

as for rythim......he came ok......he had way better punches along with flo.....an that's all he really needed here

vote- R


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