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Verstyle vs 8th World Wonder
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if i step up to flo/
u know the matters the same/ and if i pull out the deuce deuce/ its gonna scater ya brain/ plus i spit ryhmes so hard/ it will get ya boys to hate ya / ur ryhmes....PLEASE!/ i used bettter shit for TOILET PAPER/ plus i know ur STYLE/ cause u stay VERSE writtin'/ but the only thing tight...is the shit u bytin/ imma call u lil TYSON/ ur style is lazy eyed/ my style will makes ur devil worshipin ass PRAISE TO GOD/ people call me lypo/ cause of the way i move weight/ but april 7th is the ony time this cat moves CAKE/ (peep his profile b-day) im out.....1 |
HA! kid you wack, your not even worth a pink slip battle, heres a quike 10min verse for you...
Enjoy :) Please open ya text book and refer to refrained violence You're so pathetic that critique's prefer to remain silent I could rip this kid's ribs apart with my practice spit And flip this hit spit by heart tearing this bastard's wit Ya last heard sh1t's outdated kid ya better switch styles It's no wonder I found ya name in Sacred Society's bitch files Like a "one hit wonder" ya mad because ya know ya pitch less This verse's a sure hit it's just a matter of which fist Outcome of this battle's something ya wouldn't wannna see Finisher: I see through your countless efforts begging for attention from RB Contracted the ever spreading virus called "I'm the greatest newbie Vainless acts of self praise through conscious humilty disgust me Must be thick skinned to have the audacity to step on these grounds Last time I checked "Mr.8th world", I highly doubt rap was a Clown It's sad for a fresh face to stride into a grave where ashes lay Your futures in shreads and sickeningly likened to that of Casius Clay Point is this, do not jump to conclusions that you might be great You'll forever remain a speck of dust if text is to decide your fate |
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Wackest shit ever... Needs elevation on every subject Flow, Punches, Multies, Personals, Structure, Wordplay...ECT.. Man... This was horrible.... Overall....-10000/20 Quote:
ALOT BETTER Structure was perfect Flow was awsome Punches were decent Wordplay was great ................................. Overall.......18/20 Vote-Verstyle Its obvious why He straight killed the newbie .............................................. |
Vers took this in every single category besides wacknes... 8th got him on that.
Serious that was some hopless shit. Vote- verse Please see this thread on what makes a valid vote. -strobe |
Eki you might of forgotten to poll vote... anyways thanks to those who have voted....upping #1 for honest votes.
Thank You Peace |
man i dont really give a fuck....i didnt wanna use anything on u...ur the one bitchin on how u wanna battle....liek i said u really wanna heat....them go to audio 2morrow
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Wow 8th Posted Like that against me too.... what da fuck that's not even a verse... that's a liek a no-show verse.....
Verstyle won... better punches better personals better everything... he had better lines.... and his lines were longer so the punch would go through... im not going to break it down any more V- Verstyle...... favorite line I see through your countless efforts begging for attention from RB Contracted the ever spreading virus called "I'm the greatest newbie return the favor please http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103439 |
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if i step up to flo/ u know the matters the same/ and if i pull out the deuce deuce/ its gonna scater ya brain/ plus i spit ryhmes so hard/ it will get ya boys to hate ya / ur ryhmes....PLEASE!/ i used bettter shit for TOILET PAPER/ plus i know ur STYLE/ cause u stay VERSE writtin'/ but the only thing tight...is the shit u bytin/ imma call u lil TYSON/ ur style is lazy eyed/ my style will makes ur devil worshipin ass PRAISE TO GOD/ people call me lypo/ cause of the way i move weight/ but april 7th is the ony time this cat moves CAKE/ (peep his profile b-day) the whole thing wasnt very good work on ya struct, 2 of your lines should be 1 work on ya punches also Verstyle Please open ya text book and refer to refrained violence You're so pathetic that critique's prefer to remain silent I could rip this kid's ribs apart with my practice spit And flip this hit spit by heart tearing this bastard's wit Ya last heard sh1t's outdated kid ya better switch styles It's no wonder I found ya name in Sacred Society's bitch files Like a "one hit wonder" ya mad because ya know ya pitch less This verse's a sure hit it's just a matter of which fist Outcome of this battle's something ya wouldn't wannna see Finisher: I see through your countless efforts begging for attention from RB Contracted the ever spreading virus called "I'm the greatest newbie Vainless acts of self praise through conscious humilty disgust me Must be thick skinned to have the audacity to step on these grounds Last time I checked "Mr.8th world", I highly doubt rap was a Clown It's sad for a fresh face to stride into a grave where ashes lay Your futures in shreads and sickeningly likened to that of Casius Clay Point is this, do not jump to conclusions that you might be great You'll forever remain a speck of dust if text is to decide your fate structure was good, flowing almost perfect had some good punches wordplay was great overall - Verstyle won this keep battlin and elevate 8th |
oPENER:verstyle
closer:verstyle punches:verstyle wordplay:verstyle I wasn't going to respond until I read the first couple of lines, and I said I have to hit it up Wonder you were not wack you just neede a lil more time maybe to work everything out. Add a word here and there and take some stuff out and you would have been fine but overall verstyle took this. My vot since I can vote now goes to:Verstyle Return the favor Gazeebo vs. oCANti and Wr!te Mind vs. oCANti |
appriciate those who have voted....................upping for more honest votes to get this battle overwith...................................
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vote versytle for having a remotly battle verse
better punches blah the whole nine this is embarrasing |
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