How can I make my shit better?
 

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...101#post1044101

I know I'm not bad ya'll, but how can I make my shit better?

most people that will read this thread will not read ure verse...however i can assure you that if you post that on the open mic forum there will be enough heads helping you out

peace

read more....build up your vocab, and hey, maybe get outside and go to a real cypher or at least freestyle in front of people not just the computer

^^^
Bro, lol I am battle champ in Flint Michigan, it'z just...I don't do text real good, but, I am in development deal wit Atlantic Records. I mean, I freestyle alot.

Thanx fo adive tho.