Family ISH
 

You say you love me
But I don’t listen
Ripping
Shit off the walls
Not living at all
You say you care
But I know you don’t
I can read you
I don’t need you
I’ll leave you
In the dust
But
I must
Stay
Mom needs me
I am her
She is me
We need each other
I love her
But you don’t love her
You say you do
But you lie
Stay up nights
On the computer
In internet chat rooms
Acting
Like a single man
Cheater
Why do you deceive her
I’m eager
To attack
But my cool I must keep
Fuck staying silent
My mind I must speak

nice replies...lol...jumpin jacks

that was really deep..i liked it alot. alot of emotion and good imagery. keep it up

nice peice....... you didnt rhyme all the way through but that just makes it more interestin 2 keep read in......return tha fava n read mine!!!!!! keep it up!

a piece written from pure emotion i'd say, not focusing really on vocab or flow, just emotion and you thoughts. it was written simple, and got your thoughts across. its a piece you can take and expand, build on top of.

~Tera~
DONT HATE