Telekinetic V/S Skrollz
 

Heres the rules

10 lines
no d/r
no hate
no swaying votes
verses due in like half hour
good luck

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I'm a pro dawg...no novice...the emcee with no losses
YOU deal with more MALE than the Canadian Postoffices
Kinetic dont think I wont pop ya....if I pull out a gat
I'll have you running for cover like an offencive quarterback
as a matter of fact... we know you dont belong in rap
you should try being a dj.... or.... sumthing like that
You aint on my level dwag... might as well let it be
like a ungly broad wanna fuck... aint no way u seein me
you can telll im truthful...jus listen to this shit I speak
ever wonder why ur grl hasnt been home in a week.....





there u go like 20 minutes worth of time.... holla back

I know your sixteen, I seen ya birthday its in eighty seven
But the only number you need to know now is nine eleven (911)
I bet you got a crew for them an you im slayin bars
The only aces that you got is when your playin cards
After im done with you, you'll be dead an wont be missed
You a bitch spittin shit even John Stocktin cant ASSIST
I grow tired of this rhyme its about time I got to the point
Only way you got dope lines, is if you spit smokin a joint
I got game like monopoly while you still on some chutes an ladders
You take whole box of ex-lax an still wont be droppin shit that matters


Aight let the votes start

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can sumone please vote on this shit.............................................. .........................................

Ok I been here for like two days an already this place has
got on my last fuckin nerve. I waste alot of fuckin time typin
this shit up an nobody even bothers to post one damn vote.
I have been in three battles and I think we got like one or two
votes. What the hell

NOBODYS VOTIN CUZ BOTH OF THESE VERSES ARE WACK.......


SO ILL START IT OFF...... LIKE I SAID THE VERSES ARE WACK...BUT

MY VOTE GOES TO TELEKINETIC...BETTER PUNCHES.....WEAK ...BUT BETTER THAN SKROLLZ

Ohh great now we get a fuckin hater
Thats some real original shit you put up there
"NOBODYS VOTIN CUZ BOTH OF THESE VERSES ARE WACK"
Lmfao

can sumone fuckin vote on this.......fuck..................................
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yo i'll vote honestly you guys need it

skrollz verse



I'm a pro dawg...no novice...the emcee with no losses
YOU deal with more MALE than the Canadian Postoffices

good opener stronge pounch

Kinetic dont think I wont pop ya....if I pull out a gat
I'll have you running for cover like an offencive quarterback

aight line no hard pounch

as a matter of fact... we know you dont belong in rap
you should try being a dj.... or.... sumthing like that

weak

You aint on my level dwag... might as well let it be
like a ungly broad wanna fuck... aint no way u seein me

weak

you can telll im truthful...jus listen to this shit I speak
ever wonder why ur grl hasnt been home in a week.....

lol...good closer got me laughing

you need to elevate try reading vet battles to get new and hard ideas try to us personals no hate jus helping you out

tele verse



I know your sixteen, I seen ya birthday its in eighty seven
But the only number you need to know now is nine eleven (911)

better opener

I bet you got a crew for them an you im slayin bars
The only aces that you got is when your playin cards

ok not that great of a pounch but still strong

After im done with you, you'll be dead an wont be missed
You a bitch spittin shit even John Stocktin cant ASSIST

good pounch

I grow tired of this rhyme its about time I got to the point
Only way you got dope lines, is if you spit smokin a joint

good pounch creative

I got game like monopoly while you still on some chutes an ladders
You take whole box of ex-lax an still wont be droppin shit that matters

closer was good

this verse was weak also but stronger from the two
better and stronger pounchs was used

both need to elevate

vot on my recent battle in sig

peace

this was an ok battle
both of ya need to elevate though but they were pretty good
considerin u r both newbs

heres the breakdown

Telekinetic

I'm a pro dawg...no novice...the emcee with no losses
YOU deal with more MALE than the Canadian Postoffices

that line was ok, 5/10

Kinetic dont think I wont pop ya....if I pull out a gat
I'll have you running for cover like an offencive quarterback

the 1st line is ok but u gotta come with a harder punch in the 2nd line
u set it up perfectly with the 1st line but quarterback pass not run
and they only play on offense so whats the point of sayin that
couldve done better 3/10

as a matter of fact... we know you dont belong in rap
you should try being a dj.... or.... sumthing like that

a punch but not a hard one 4/10

You aint on my level dwag... might as well let it be
like a ungly broad wanna fuck... aint no way u seein me

just not hot, gotta improve 3/10

you can telll im truthful...jus listen to this shit I speak
ever wonder why ur grl hasnt been home in a week.....

not hot 3/10

18/50


Skrollz

I know your sixteen, I seen ya birthday its in eighty seven
But the only number you need to know now is nine eleven (911)

thats a good personal and the 911 thing was hot, 7/10

I bet you got a crew for them an you im slayin bars
The only aces that you got is when your playin cards

don't know about that one, 4/10

After im done with you, you'll be dead an wont be missed
You a bitch spittin shit even John Stocktin cant ASSIST

now that a good punch, I like dat sports reference 8/10

I grow tired of this rhyme its about time I got to the point
Only way you got dope lines, is if you spit smokin a joint

thats good but kinda played 4.5/10

I got game like monopoly while you still on some chutes an ladders
You take whole box of ex-lax an still wont be droppin shit that matters

not the best but ok 4/10

27.5/100

the numbers show skrollz just had a better overall verse

vote=skrollz

OMG I just got robbed

Agony man you just mixed up the damn verses that was my verse
that won lmao aint that some shit ahh well

both came average.... both verses had their fillers...

Kinetic...i liked tha stocken line from kinetic.. and tha joint.. and tha closer...wordplay came stronger

Skrollz.... you had tha structure.... wordplay... but kinetics was better...and yours flowed a lil better....

so

vote-Telekinetic