Dialect OTYP vs Lyrical Humour
 

you know the rules

lets get i goin den

get at me

holla at ya boi

When the crowd here me rap’s I drop bombs like the jap’s
I’m a lyricall genius that’s what I am, my bombs hit u like a shot “b -bang”
This biacth come from Baltimore, u need to step up your game then u may score
So your in to b-ball ay? Just a bunch gays running round to past the days
U wanna get into a real mans sport like football, Seconds thoughts they wont let u “no queers at all”
Nice pic u ave there, how long did it take u to get your mum to stand and stare
So how is ur mum, I aint seen her in ages, last time we met I gave her some babies
In fact u might even be one of my offspring’s, ur mum must be rollin in the benfits “chih ching”
I noticed how u battled and still aint won yet, hang in there no need to fret
But I cant see u winning against me im a fucked up mc ull see.
I honestly cant believe u play basket ball u cunt
U put the truth in saying “white man cant jump”

i came ta the mic, ta cock lyrics and blast, this kid spits garbage, i came ta take out the trash,/ in the past i've deleted niggas from thier mere mortal existence, i attack ya path of least resistance/, with consistence, of punctures in ya self-subsistence/, assistance is required in ya journey to prevail, specialy when im deliverin crome to ya dome like priorty mail, my lyrical detail/, will derail ya train thus i take off and loose ya, my lyrical fire will abuse ya,/ play like family fued for victory,i use ya, and survey says...humours the loosa/ the victor is me,to hot ta be standin next ta this, slugs spin ya head like the exorcist/ my verbal attacks snap ya in half like an anorexic wrist, in these battles i lead ya ta death cuz suspense is bliss/ i curl my fist and hits swell ya brain, its obvious this kids dumb he cant even spell his name/........humour?, come on get it right, this fag couldnt spit fire if i lit the mic,/ and gave him kerosene ta spray before he posted, but me im straight fire, last time i dropped on this site the whole net got roasted/


aight then lets get votes

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I think dialect took this one easily
just a better overall verse, I mean everything was perfect
dialect had some mad nice wordlplay that I was feelin
and his punches were mad hard, and that personal he put in there(spellin of humor) led him to win the battle
humour, u need to try to use some harder punches and u
abused the b-ball thing, it was kinda gettin tirin, but keep battlin
u'll only get better

vote=dialect otyp

Dialect took this despite his awful structure. he had some hard personals and punches. Lyrical had a very newbie verse, no hard shit weak amnd played lines. Vote=Dialect.
Please drop an honest vote here. Thanks
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103638

uppin for some votes mang hook me up mang we need our votes mang haha mang uppin mang mang ger-er-dun

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this. battle. sucked.

lyrical humour, holy shit. you had stupid, non-rhyming punches. you didn't have any wordplay, and it was absolutely not clever at all. all you did have were personals, which, really, dont matter when you're rapping about how much better football is than basketball. honestly, lines like "So how is ur mum, I aint seen her in ages, last time we met I gave her some babies" make me feel embarrassed to be part of the same site as you.

dialect...i agree with tactical, you had horrible structure. however, that was offset by the fact that you had things that actually rhymed. most of the punches were weak, and you didnt really have any great wordplay, but anything is better when compared to lyrical. one other thing, they spell it "humour" in britain, and since he said mum, i think we can surmise that he is british, and thus, it makes sense.

anyway....

vote: dialect

despite the fact that since i grilled you, i dont think you will, but hey, i spent time on your battle, do the same for me:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...did=103574--vs. handcuffs

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Dialect
most definitly with better pounchs wordplay and metas
if your structure was tight your flow have been also but work on it
other cat you need to elevate read vet battles for ideas

no hate vote

hit my battle in my sig i took the time you shopuld to

peace

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dialect you merked him, u get ya first win if it was up to me, the other dude was to played out with his verse but keep it up folk
vote-dialect otpy

ay i voted on yall battle so hit mine up vs fyreman

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