LyricalJedi vs Daven Motion
 

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I don't know where this person is at so I can't battle unless I have this opponet where are you at Daven Motion? Where are you?.............................................. ...................??????????????????????????????? ??????????

cHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE EEEEEEEEEEEEEck In Nigguh.

Daven Motion cartoon hero name?!!! lol

I put niggas in check like a criminal in a airport
I shit on your whole style like Raja Davenport
Daven Motion better off changing your name to Daven Lotion
Like a guy who pays for phone sex you get none
I drop verses quicker then Warrick Dunn
This niggaz like a bum home got no home
I drop shit from here to rome your style is like chrome
While my shit is platinum
Like them niggaz that shot pac I comin stright for the dome
Like the Cleveland Browns season this shit is over

Explanation for the slow ass niggaz:
Browns record states for itself
Raja Davenport shitted in his homegirls closet
Dunn runs a 42/40

Disgusted by u..there's no chance wining cmon….bitch stink’s
^ scripts are fascinating ..rapes herbs, so I writ 6 hint’s
O.W.N-age…left your concepts amazed by words.
Specify aimed at him & activated. his an irritate nerve
Once I punch, he’s damaged…a forced chain reaction
Picked up knowledge...you should know..^that’s the way I Axe umm
Horizontally picked up..with bareknuckles, punch this fool!
Soft cat’s..adeble for breakfast dinner, N perhaps Lunch Is cool.
But the hunch is fool, known to me..your lame…N the fact is..
Battled Sergent, Da sviour ..<--came close., but ur the whackest!

aiight now you got both of the verses make your selection I fucked up on one line " The niggaz like a bum he has no home" vote vote vote do not comment and don't vote I can understand if you have under 100 votes. y'all can still put your input

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Originality - Daven.. no played concepts.. all fresh
Punches - Both.. Daven was witty and Jedi was raw
Personals - Both.. one or two each
Flow - Daven.. knitted ur punches together nicely.. caught it easily
Structure - Both.. easy to follow

VoTe = Daven

Less played concepts an some witty punches coupled wiv a perfect flow = the win.. not bad at all from Jedi.. jus a few too much old shit re-hashed.

peep this an vote plz:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103846

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I put niggas in check like a criminal in a airport
I shit on your whole style like Raja Davenport
^^^eh...weak wordplay, weak punch.
Daven Motion better off changing your name to Daven Lotion
^^^WEAK
Like a guy who pays for phone sex you get none
I drop verses quicker then Warrick Dunn
^^^ok wordplay, i suppose.
This niggaz like a bum home got no home
I drop shit from here to rome your style is like chrome
While my shit is platinum
^^^more weak punches.
Like them niggaz that shot pac I comin stright for the dome
^^^heh...ok punch
Like the Cleveland Browns season this shit is over
^^^lame.

Disgusted by u..there's no chance wining cmon….bitch stink’s
^ scripts are fascinating ..rapes herbs, so I writ 6 hint’s
^^^...what?
O.W.N-age…left your concepts amazed by words.
Specify aimed at him & activated. his an irritate nerve
^^^decent wordplay, bad punch.
Once I punch, he’s damaged…a forced chain reaction
Picked up knowledge...you should know..^that’s the way I Axe umm
^^^weak wordplay...weak punch.
Horizontally picked up..with bareknuckles, punch this fool!
Soft cat’s..adeble for breakfast dinner, N perhaps Lunch Is cool.
^^^weak
But the hunch is fool, known to me..your lame…N the fact is..
Battled Sergent, Da sviour ..<--came close., but ur the whackest!
^^^weak again.


vote: lyrical jedi


return the favor....

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^You Stupid Herb You Should Be Banned For That if you dont know what a punch is dont even bother entering my league the fuck? n00bs upimn..............

that vote should be removed coz if u dont understand the punch then ur missin it completely.. they were evidently too witty for some eh Daven.. shame.

Both Verses Were Pretty Good....Though in my View Damon Took tha Flow,Wordplay,and structure......Botha Had Pre

Both Verses Were Pretty Good....Though in my View Damon Took tha Flow,Wordplay,and structure......Botha Had Pretty Ill Closures

Like them niggaz that shot pac I comin stright for the dome
Like the Cleveland Browns season this shit is over
^^this Line Would have been ILL though it don't Rhyme

Once I punch, he’s damaged…a forced chain reaction
Picked up knowledge...you should know..^that’s the way I Axe umm

^^that Wuz ILL...Nice Punch and Wordplay

Overall Vote~Damon

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