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kuntryboi 01-04-04 12:46 AM

fyreboy vs kuntryboi
 
ok folk 10 lines max......
no hate votes no d/r
u know the rest drop ya verse pretty quick tho

kuntryboi 01-04-04 01:01 AM

look, it only takes 10 lines to beat a dude, ill let him choose//
(two choices) take it like a man, or eat ya food through a tube//
thats liquid food, straight to ya tummy, i will merk this dummy//
im laughin at ya name............... but aint a damn thang funny//
my style mo flexible than gumby.... but you aint got no style//
since ya pops aint around, ima have ta punish you like my child//
.....tarheel, i scar and kill, put that heat to ya teeth, and burn ya grill//
i pop these pussies like valum pills, but i aint no substance abuser//
beat ya verse, im a rhyme bruisa, thats how i do it man//
i done wet you up so bad, they gonna call me the fireman//

fyreboy 01-04-04 01:08 AM

ayo its fyreboy u better call dat truck/
for i come down to atl fuck u up/
dis dude so ugly he couldnt ge a date if he flipped back his calender/
dude so young can even buy a beer/
aye omie i got dumbo on the phone he whats back his ears/
when i beat u homie try to fight back the tears/
dis bitch nigga put the factor in the fear/
ill rip his voice box den scream in ear/
man i dont give a damn bout nigga/
i stuck a pen in his lips so he wont look like jigga/

kuntryboi 01-04-04 01:08 AM

damn i fucked up the last line lol, i was thinkin you was fyreman, but if its any count ill redo it.......here it go
beat ya verse, im a rhyme bruisa, i come equipped wit heavy toys//
i done wet you up so bad, it put outcha fire......boy//

kuntryboi 01-04-04 01:09 AM

ok i dont really need that last line, i take that back lol.........yall get them votes in................................................ ......................

fyreboy 01-04-04 01:09 AM

ayo its fyreboy u better call dat truck/
for i come down to atl fuck u up/
dis dude so ugly he couldnt ge a date if he flipped back his calender/
dude so young can even buy a beer/
aye homie i got dumbo on the phone he whats back his ears/
when i beat u homie try to fight back the tears/
dis bitch nigga put the factor in the fear/
ill rip his voice box den scream in ear/
man i dont give a damn bout nigga/
i rip em in his on basement like big tigger/

fyreboy 01-04-04 01:11 AM

damn i did t twice shit!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!

kuntryboi 01-04-04 01:14 AM

calm down itll be ok lol.....we will call it even since i changed my last 2 lines.............you can keep your second verse.......ay if yall drop a vote on this give me a link and i will vote on your battle.......................................

kuntryboi 01-04-04 01:25 AM

ay yall dont sleep on this battle, vote on this, post a link, and i will vote on your battle.............how hard is it?

Joker 01-04-04 01:29 AM

kuntryboi tooked this his verse was more complexed and he had better disses and flow.fyre work on ur flow and disses and u should also work on structure and make u lines a lil bit longer.


Vote:kuntryboi

kuntryboi 01-04-04 01:35 AM

can i get a poll vote?????????????????????????????????????????????? ?????????????????????????????????????????????????? ?????????????????????????????????????????????????? ????????????????

kuntryboi 01-04-04 01:48 AM

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Castro XL 01-04-04 11:08 AM

Kuntry boi cuz he didnt have stretched lines and his shit feel inplace good multi's punches and disses so


vote-kuntriboy

KaYNe 01-04-04 12:31 PM

kuntryboi, punches were quite good but a lot of your spit wasnt directed at your opponent. Metas were quite nice. You verse flowed well.

fyreboy, you had some quite good punches, but mainly they were pretty weak. rhyme scheme was simple and off in some places (calender/beer). Flow was quite choppy. As with your opponent, you directed few punches at your opponent. ok metas & personals.

Although i dont think either of you came with that much heat, it was still pretty one sided.

Vote: kuntryboi (had less faults and harder punches).



C.Quip -vs- KaYNe
^ It would be much appreciated if you could vote fairly on this battle.

kuntryboi 01-04-04 12:49 PM

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