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Eki vs Tek
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Ya crazy dude, i'll leave ya' brains mashed like baby food
And beat just half ya' ass.. *Yawn* Cuz i'm in a lazy mood.. I'll give you daily losses. Also the reason you leavin' ya' house mad Talk about trigger play? Only thing you click, is on ya mousepad.. I didn't ask fa this battle, but i'm in, so you must have bad luck I'll punch through ya spine, wit a motorola, tellin' you to call fa backup!.. Hahaha, need I say more? Yes, I know you suck, but i'll take the win, cuz face it.. I'm greedy And then i'll relax in this battle, it's a fact kid, im takin' it easy.. Attack you with this lecture, shatter backs with a gesture Eki needs to be renamed to MC Cocaine, cuz he cracks under pressure.. Use common sense.. Your confidence, only compliments the obvious That my verses deem more kids dead, then the Chinese Consulate.. To tell you the truth, it's kinda funny, you actually think ya' shit rocks? This nikka Eki is like 'Heroine Needles in Sandles', Cuz all ya Hits flop!.. Believe in me, He screams "stop beating me!" repeatedly, conceivably The way I served this Cat, voters will think this is a chinese eatery!!../ |
I am battling a retard, Who reckons he was born in N/A
Let me help you out, I am your father, you were born 1987/may When i start typing my rhymes, its like a vodoo curse you wouldnt be ill, if your heart was about to burst All you are is a hoax, like mens expedition to mars If you were riding horses, i would be chasing you in cars With your 13 wins, you claim u are ill, yeh you got the spittin-disorder You couldnt spit, if your mouth was filled up with water Seriously your wack, wins come from newbies, your not arti-stic leave RB, Stop rhyming, its not for you - be realistic Tek, you dont show much in your profile, what you got to hide Fat Boy... you would still look big.. even with a elephan by your side After this humiliation I will be your God, dont even reply, why bother? Every time you want to talk to me from now,you will start with "Our father |
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Uppin #3 .. comeon people............................................ .................................................. .................................................. ...................ill vote on your if you leave a link.......
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tek
Ya crazy dude, i'll leave ya' brains mashed like baby food And beat just half ya' ass.. *Yawn* Cuz i'm in a lazy mood.. I'll give you daily losses. Also the reason you leavin' ya' house mad Talk about trigger play? Only thing you click, is on ya mousepad.. I didn't ask fa this battle, but i'm in, so you must have bad luck I'll punch through ya spine, wit a motorola, tellin' you to call fa backup!.. good stuff good metas and wordplay not to pounch hard pounches Hahaha, need I say more? Yes, I know you suck, but i'll take the win, cuz face it.. I'm greedy And then i'll relax in this battle, it's a fact kid, im takin' it easy.. Attack you with this lecture, shatter backs with a gesture Eki needs to be renamed to MC Cocaine, cuz he cracks under pressure.. Use common sense.. Your confidence, only compliments the obvious That my verses deem more kids dead, then the Chinese Consulate.. To tell you the truth, it's kinda funny, you actually think ya' shit rocks? This nikka Eki is like 'Heroine Needles in Sandles', Cuz all ya Hits flop!.. Believe in me, He screams "stop beating me!" repeatedly, conceivably The way I served this Cat, voters will think this is a chinese eatery!!../ nuthing special no real hard pounchs that stood up...you had metas and wordplay overall weak verse eki IP: 5203 B663 I am battling a retard, Who reckons he was born in N/A Let me help you out, I am your father, you were born 1987/may When i start typing my rhymes, its like a vodoo curse you wouldnt be ill, if your heart was about to burst All you are is a hoax, like mens expedition to mars If you were riding horses, i would be chasing you in cars With your 13 wins, you claim u are ill, yeh you got the spittin-disorder You couldnt spit, if your mouth was filled up with water Seriously your wack, wins come from newbies, your not arti-stic leave RB, Stop rhyming, its not for you - be realistic Tek, you dont show much in your profile, what you got to hide Fat Boy... you would still look big.. even with a elephan by your side After this humiliation I will be your God, dont even reply, why bother? Every time you want to talk to me from now,you will start with "Our father lol...ok well weak also but you came on jus a bit better better wordplay better metas better pounchs but you only won by a bit ----------------overall vote Eki------- i took the time you should to check and vote battle in sig peace |
eki won this bc the utha niggas shit was too long and stretched and eki had better punches...........
vote eki |
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Vote-Eki
punches were jus not hard by both but wot got it was Flow n sustainment Punches-Tie flow-Eki structure-Eki..even tho a little stretched metas-Tek Enjoyment-Both sustainment-Eki MAKE SURE YA HIT THIS LINK UP....PLZ............... http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...threadid=102931 |
Very good battle...
Kudos to both slingas. Overall, I have to give this to Tek... He just hit harder with more and wittier wordplay. The "crack", "consulate", "sandles", and "chinese eatery" were very nice. Some were a tiny bit played, but ya flipped em nicely and made them your own. Eki was tight, no doubt... Just some of it seemed forced, "spittin disorder/water", the "elephant" line... Was like, huh? Good wordplay, tight verse... Just not as good as Tek's. Peace Holla back... Born vs. Kuntry |
Man... Tek caned Eki by far... how peeps don't see it I dunno...
The opening few bars were enough in my eyes. Creativity... Tight similies throughout, punches were always hittin.. mousepad, sandles etc... not too many personals tho, but still more than enough. Flow/structure also on point... Eki's wasn't the worst verse, but in comparison it looked basic.. played concepts, 'I'm ya dad' etc... lacked anything that stood out as an effective punch really... People open ya eyes.... Vote - Tek Return the favour with an Honest vote - http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101913 |
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Yo exactly mayn.. appreciated.. but let the votes continue..
uppin.. an im followin links now.. . ... ..... ....... ..... ... . |
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