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Razer 01-04-04 12:23 PM

---->yo People<----
 
Yo, its my first try at trying to rap, let me know what you think yea?

Im not like these other guys, fix up or otherwise,
You'll force me to be the cause of tears in your mothers eyes,
I look below the belt, keep my stuff beyond the guidelines,
It seems that lifes been so sh*t before that these are fine times,
Ill leave you below the ground while im watching from the skylines,
I dont take notice of faggots, i just perfect my fine rhymes,
Think you can diss me?, no im not having that,
I'll reach for my weapons, and hit back against your habitat.


Lol, just made that up now n im already bored of typing. Anywayz, let me know what you think. Lataz

C-Section 01-04-04 12:27 PM

far from the number 1 underground uk rapper

N-Demik 01-04-04 12:35 PM

^LoL

Fl~O~mEtRy 01-04-04 01:29 PM

hehe, its ok, thats all i hafta say

C.Quip 01-04-04 01:39 PM

I Think You Tryna Sound A Bit Like Tupac..

RythmicTendicies 01-04-04 02:03 PM

shouldn;t it be in open mic...

you got potential..but post it in OM.

Razer 01-04-04 02:04 PM

Sorry, im new to this shit, just signed up earlier....N im not tryna be tupac by the way - im white lol

:) 01-04-04 02:10 PM

nice shit ... you can chill out on all that tough guy shit though

KaaS 01-04-04 02:25 PM

not bad should be in om though

Razer 01-04-04 02:32 PM

AIGHT, SORRY BWT POSTING IT HERE PEOPLE. GO CHECK MY RAP IN OPEN MICH, I JUST MADE IT UP NOW, HOPE U LIKE IT - THANX. PE@CE


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