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Detrimental vs. :)
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No dickriding, hate, or crew votes No BITING (i see its common round here lol) I hve to reply within 20 minutes of his verse Lets do this...Waiting for you to drop 1 |
aiight here we go
yo this GEEKS LAME...and dude you got a fuckin WEAK NAME i could rip your brains out and throw it on the "hollywood boardwalk" and you still wouldnt have "STREET FAME" i got a UNIQUE GAME while you STAY FAKIN your like raps version of CLAY AIKEN the chances of you gettin signed is like that of eminem makin a deal with a GAY STATION you've probably had a dick in EACH JAW cuz all you do is reach in GEEKS DRAWS your damn mouths like "pac man" cuz all it does is consume and EAT BALLS @ im exposin you for what you are a snitch and a CRIME SQUEL who'd suck of a whole label to get a RHYME DEAL your mouths probably had more bombs go off in it than an iraqi MINE FIELD i should have a NINE PEELED at you SNITCH FAGGOT all you do is roll with BITCH MAGGOTS your whole crews lips are like tight underwears cuz they stick to and KISS ASSES |
This kid is wack as hell, people can smell the wackness within miles-of-the-place...
So i'll press backspace twice, and wipe that stupid fuckin smile-from-ya-face!!.. I can see that ya trying to rhyme, and no better place to start than rhyming-online... But you're like kids affraid of the dark, you'd probably cry for some-shine!.. I'm here to enlighten you, so smiley face, I just hope that you can maybe-see... That having trees over the road is the only time you'll ever live in 'shady'-streets.. You've gotta advertise links in ya sig, because truth is no1 wants to read-ya-shit... And the last time ya mom ate a roll, she lifted it up and seen-ya-dick!.. :laugh: Like a girl that ran away from home, this faggot is nothin but a lost-bitch... And working your day job as a lawnsman is the only time u'll 'drop-shit'.. You thought i'd be a wack kat, but man it so happens-that-i'm-good... And having head lice is the only reason he always says he's 'scrating-in-the-hood'.. . . . . . yep...it's over... |
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cmon can we get some votes in here or wat......... |
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Opener- Tie (Nice opener from both)
Structure- D Flow-D Creativity-;) Punches-;) Vocab-:) Metas-D Closer-:)" Close battle, but overal Ima give it to :) He had way better punches... Good shit Detrimental, keep elevatin' Return da fava http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103798 |
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:) had some god ass punches like:@ im exposin you for what you are a snitch and a CRIME SQUEL who'd suck of a whole label to get a RHYME DEAL your mouths probably had more bombs go off in it than an iraqi MINE FIELD and i was feel'n this line by D: This kid is wack as hell, people can smell the wackness within miles-of-the-place... So i'll press backspace twice, and wipe that stupid fuckin smile-from-ya-face! (this was my favorite line of the whole battle) but when it came down to consistency and structure ........ vote: :) check tha sig for links to my battles |
uppin for more votes............................................. .................................................. .................... if niggas vote ill be sure to vote in your battles
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Sorry...
I think peeps is ridin the 100 + guy here... Smiley had some good shit, no doubt... Won't say he didn't. But so much of that was played and not directed at anyone in particular... Pre-written like a motherfucker. After nearly 200 battles, even split on the wins and losses... Trust, I can spot one. Street Fame hit personally, (the "backspace" line was tight). Hit with wordplay in almost every line... And ripped the punches WITH PERSONALS! Letting you know this was a freestyle!!! Punches, originality, wordplay, and some nice flow... Give the win to Street Fame. Ya'll who voted the other way... For shame! |
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Flow-D Creativity-smile Punches-smile Vocab-smile Metas-D Closer-"simliy ;) won with better stucture but it was not the greatest battle I have ever read |
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Dis battle was very Funny was feelin :) verse cuz of the structure and how his shyt was on point.....buttt ReaSonz: 1. I was Feeling this Line Right here: Quote:
^^^^ Dat was Funny....the whole Eminem thing....if u had worded it a lil Shorter it woulda Came out betta but it was good! 2. Dis Line right here....Just FuCked up errthing from My Point of view Quote:
lol^^^^^ Dat Ish was funny....hehe 2.Another Line tha was str8 was: Quote:
dat was funni^^^ But then i kinda got lost in ya shyt like 4 instance [QUOTE][You thought i'd be a wack kat, but man it so happens-that-i'm-good... And having head lice is the only reason he always says he's 'scrating-in-the-hood'.. /QUOTE] Scrating in the hood??? u lost me there.....i get the scratching....but where the hell does IN THE HOOD come from???? hmmmm Overall 8/10 well my vote goes 2 Vote: StreetFame |
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