Postman vs HotBarz
 

Aight you know the rules
BLIND SPIT
10-12 lines
NO CREW VOTES
must drop with 20 mins of chexckin

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first of all...this girl cant hang at all/
cause i got this bitch smokin my dick/
like the cigar.....in her avatar/
alll she is a bust down.../
she swear that she bust clowns/
but the on the time she is HOOD/
is when she "DELIVERS"...in UP TOWN/
u spit different scripts....but flow the same rhyme/
my flows will "POST" this bitch and her "MAN"/
at the same time/
this chick can "THINK" that her raps arent whack/
rip out ya spine..send it....and have u "DELIVER" it "BACK"/......im out .....1

lets go post....flow so we can get some votes.....plus its bout to be 20 min............................................... ..................................................

Hotbarz, i think ya touch senses are "tainted",
The closes you get to hot bars, is sceptic tank maintence,
so fall back kid you just a beginner,
hotbarz? you grabbed the mic and created winter,
Now ya name makes me wonda and think
cuz It aint summa, and you aint even old enough to drink
and dog ya aint shit at all,
only RB ya runnin is after the quaterback pitches the ball,
it seems like when you spit talent ducks and hides
so next time unluck Ya barz ....... cuz skill is stuck inside

Just pointing out postMAN is male.
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ggggggggggggoooooooooooodddddddddd observation nigga...................... now lets get some votes........ DO NOT VIEW IF YOUR NOT GOING TO VOTE.. NO REASON THIS SHOULD HAVE 100 VIEWS AND CANT GET A SINGLE VOTE>> STOP BEING LAZY FUCKERS.. YES I WILL VOTE ON YOUR BATTLE ALSO.

dawg do free post.......if ur gonna post...vote.......no lets get some..............please......../..................................

I would of voted but postman hadnt dropped yet,
He dropped just before it was posted,
anyway:

Vote = Postman

Overall he just had a better verse, he had a few nice lines and harder hittin punches.His verse flowed better aswell.

hotbarz you need to elevate, no beef or nuttin, just the truth, you need to work on your punches and try and use some more orignal concepts, in time ull get better.

anyway Postman gets this,

hit this up with a honest vote

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103845

Ayt dawgs this is the way we guna do this:

Postman- nice verse , good punches and a nice structure 2 it.
Yours was easier 2 read and was more enjoyable.

Hotbars- a lil bit harder 2 read, not enjoyable, punchlines did nt hit hard enough and strutructure was good!!

overall- postman, hotbars u will elevate orver time!!

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102670

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102455

i took the time 2 vote on urs honestly now do the same 4 me!

I cant poll vote, but ima break it down anyway.



Hotbarz, well you made a mistake straight away thinkin he was a girl and callin him 'chick', 'girl' etc, you were at an advantage straight away coz it took the sting out of a lot of your punches. Other than that, the flow was ok, as was the playin off the name. lack of metas & wordplay.

Postman, you brought the harder punches & personals. Metas backed up the punches. Flowed well. Rhymin was off on 1 bar (tainted/maintenance).


Vote: Postman for an overall better verse.



C.Quip -vs- KaYNe
^ It would be much appreciated if you could vote fairly on this battle.

well, i think is tight, hotbarz got many verses freed (didnt rhymed) and his shit bout postman being a female spoils it a bit..
postman did a lil bit better, so i would have voted him, if i could...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...988#post1050988
come on, you promised

sorry to clog up the thread, but wen in the breakdown of hotbarz spit, i should have said disadvantage, not advantage.



sorry bout that.............

cant vote but postman took it
hot barz u need to elevate........................................... .....

All these votes but no votes.. peopl who can poll plz vote....... ill hit u back. thank youu.............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .......................