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ILLunatic v.s MYSTERIOSO rd2
MYSTERIOSO IM'd me sayin he wanna battle again...
And i really aint got shit else to do... so here we go... 10 Lines MYSTERIOSO spit first No Feeding No Biteing No Recycling No Stretching No Crew Votes No Hate Votes No D/R Votes... Good Luck...You need it... |
LMAO If You Battle This Kid....Again...You Are A Herb...
1.) He Has No Record...He Could Be A Alias And Giving You Free Wins 2.) Battle Me If You're Not Scared 3.) I Bet After This Battle The Kid Will Never Post Again 4.) Your 14-2... Come On... Just Giving My Opinions |
I GOT THIS NIGGA SHELLSHOCKED
GOT MY SHELL COCKED/ ILL HIT THIS NIGGA LIKE LOCKS IN A SOCK TIL U FIL U AINT ILL LIKE TYSON DID HOLYFIELD/ ITS REAL YOU KNOW WHAT THEY SAY U THE PASS AROUND BITCH THAT GIVES EVERYONE AIDS/(YOU ILL) I GUESS THATS HOW U GOT UR NAME WHEN THE LUNATIC PART COMES WITH 6 KNIVES AND A NINE/ IM DONE LET THE VOTES COME CUZ IT DONT REALLY MATTER WHETHER OR NOT I WON |
Wanna do Round 2... ... Losing, kid your bound too
I'm spittin a pound through, ya hittin tha ground soon Ya tried hoein Taktik... ... ... And quickly it got reversed Get this kid a hurse, Cuz steppin ta me he gettin kursed Better find a death bed, cuz he's been found by mortality Fucka battle... ... i'll murder you in single line formality Defeating this bitch... ... ... its no challange its to easy Gettin ripped so breazy, i'd swear this bitch was Too Easy I've beatin you 5-0 once... ... ... ...And I just did it again Spittin lyrical sin, I done flipped this bitch apart and within |
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LMFAO... i bet you are an alias... :thefinger :gfy: So get off my nuts |
Dayuum. Mysterioso has to be a front, cause that flow simply and straight up blew. no one could rap that nasty and not want to lose. but i'll give ILLunitic the benefit of the doubt cause his rap was bangin'.
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"Ill" You Know That I'm Correct...
Battle Someone Worth Battling Instead Of This Wack "Newbie" ............... .................. ..................... ........................ |
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mysterioso fucking sucks........thats about it.... Too basic
ILL.....flow and structure was good....punches decent enuf to win... personals kilt him..... could work on ya vocab... but thats a minor thing vote-ILLunatic Hit this up with An honest vote....Thanks http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103947 |
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I GOT THIS NIGGA SHELLSHOCKED GOT MY SHELL COCKED/ ILL HIT THIS NIGGA LIKE LOCKS IN A SOCK Wack, simple rhyme scheme, no punch TIL U FIL U AINT ILL LIKE TYSON DID HOLYFIELD/ Wack, and flow falls off after words ITS REAL YOU KNOW WHAT THEY SAY U THE PASS AROUND BITCH THAT GIVES EVERYONE AIDS/(YOU ILL) I GUESS THATS HOW U GOT UR NAME Pathetic, word play is simplistic, punch? WHEN THE LUNATIC PART COMES WITH 6 KNIVES AND A NINE/ IM DONE LET THE VOTES COME CUZ IT DONT REALLY MATTER WHETHER OR NOT I WON Really wack, bad closer, no punch either Conclusion on MYSTERIOSO There is a word that can describe this... hmm, what is it??? Ohh, I know wack... It was simplistic, horrible structure, the flow was easy like hores on a paycheck day. No punches that even caused contact from my point of view. You need to do more than elevate, Quite... - ILLunatic - Wanna do Round 2... ... Losing, kid your bound too I'm spittin a pound through, ya hittin tha ground soon its aight, but no punch, bad closer. Ya tried hoein Taktik... ... ... And quickly it got reversed Get this kid a hurse, Cuz steppin ta me he gettin kursed aight personal, better the words though. Better find a death bed, cuz he's been found by mortality Fucka battle... ... i'll murder you in single line formality pretty good line, It was straight Defeating this bitch... ... ... its no challange its to easy Gettin ripped so breazy, i'd swear this bitch was Too Easy Bad wording, weak punch. I've beatin you 5-0 once... ... ... ...And I just did it again Spittin lyrical sin, I done flipped this bitch apart and within pretty good finisher, had a little wit. Conclusion on ILLunatic It was a weak verse, But I know you didnt come your hardest. You had weak punches, and the word play was bad. YOu accually had punches and word play. Nice job trying to cover up the structure with the " ... ... ... " LOL. You did just enough to win this... Vote - ILLunatic Full Conclusion ILL cam harder, and he did better than the other guy at everything. He did just enough, and I know that was just toying with him, LOL... Umm, thats all I really have to say. He just beat him at every subject of a battle... |
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You damn... Sleepin sons of bitches
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punches ill: Ya tried hoein Taktik... ... ... And quickly it got reversed
Get this kid a hurse, Cuz steppin ta me he gettin kursed metas none: <<---------------- multies none: <<--------------- personals ill: Wanna do Round 2... ... Losing, kid your bound too I'm spittin a pound through, ya hittin tha ground soon karo retire now please overall illunatic ............................. ............................. peep mine in my sig |
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MYSTERIOSO is new with only 6 posts.. dont u think this is a bit harsh? Oh well nice try though...
mystrtioso.. please dont call him a nigga LMAO cant u see his avy is white.. ha ha Wack stuff! at least Illunatic made sense logically vote-IL |
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