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adagio 01-04-04 06:27 PM

adagio vs jab
 
10-15 lines
check in
u spit first
no d/r
etc etc

Jab DQ'ed for spamming links to this battle
-Cprogress

adagio 01-04-04 06:28 PM

checkin in

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Jab 01-04-04 06:29 PM

Checkin In^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Jab 01-04-04 06:41 PM

u to spit first^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^

adagio 01-04-04 06:47 PM

im gonna cut the top of ya head off//
that way you might be more open minded//
go ask ya backpackin dad for advice//
ask him for advice on rap and sex, you have no clue//
his reply...sorry son im just as dumb as you//
dont even think of speakin ya mind you'll end up speechless//
im so good i should use a line from 8-mile instead of my own//
and you know you aint worth makin shit up for//
you should give up you really do suck//
leave RB, join g-unit, and beg for mercy//
god should be ashamed of himself//
your his most stupidest creation//

hurry up and spit...aint got all night

Jab 01-04-04 06:55 PM

I dont need to brag to win this battle//
seems like you bin writtin your rhymes wid a baby rattle//
Heres some advice for you, Use a pen it'll come out better//
Then i could compare your shit to a 3rd grade love letter//
You need a kick in tha teeth, that'll stop you from grinnin//
With shit verses like that bitch your lettin me winnin//
Hey my grammar aint tha best, but who gives a fuck//
With tha shit comin out ya mouth....HERE SOME TOILET DUCK*//
Seems like you gotta re-think ya lines//
Cos THIS AINT NO R.KELLY QUEER MAN BUMP'N'GRIND//
Ill make it easier for you, ill wrap it up//
Here tha last thing im a say....//
SHUT THA FUCK UP//

*TOILET DUCK = English Bleach used for cleaning toilets

Jab 01-04-04 07:10 PM

Up'N^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^NEEDIN VOTES

Trapt Wit 01-04-04 07:36 PM

I got linked here from EI

Vote- the kid who didnt link to this



C-Section 01-04-04 07:38 PM

i vote for adiago, he ripped jab apart. his opener was better then jabs whole verse, i dont think i need to explain anymore.

writing you rhymes with a baby rattle LMAO! that has to be the gayest line i have ever heard.

vote - adiago

Brethren 01-04-04 07:40 PM

Vote Jab, this battle was sorry, both could use serious elevation, abagio you fucking suck, go eat a crumpet.

deela03 01-04-04 07:41 PM

Adagio:
basic scheme and a basic spit didnt flow cuz there were no multis u had some ok punches

Score: 6/10

jab:
good flow stayed smooth and pretty consistent cept for a few parts were choppy, ya spit was pretty basic to and u had some ok punches as well

Score: 7/10

Vote: jab: for a more consistent cleaner flow

deela03 01-04-04 07:42 PM

if either of you two have time could you please submit a vote on deela Vs Danksta

it would be very much appreciated
thank you

Accelerate 01-04-04 07:43 PM

Vote-adagio because he didn't rhyme and the other kid did, but he used played lines and sucked major balls and yeah, adagio didn't hafta rhyme to win.


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