complicated understandings
 

Why does everything that you say have to be so scientific/
You have to use words that you never heard in any rap cause everybody is such a critic/
Well to all you motherfuckers suck my dick cause you know nothin, why dont you for once listen/
I spit whatever is literate or explicit but sorry i aint a fuckin scientist, whats the concept you missin/
I see these bitches using words that im not sure if they even exist on any cocksuckers dictionary/
You know everything you spit is not in your real vocabulary/
Stop trying to be smart or tryin to be intelligent/
If you for real then you gotta an exception but so many fakes dont mention real stuff and it has to be this complicated element/
Name a rapper you know that actually says shit like that in a verse/
None do and curse but all your shit is worse and not real that is in this universe/
So why you tryin to be someone else and be so common/
I dont know why dont you ask yourself when you try to be rhymin/
You leavin this by tryin to diss, you sound like a geek/
Its plain weak when you speak but i cant understand whats movin form yo fat ass cheeks/
Stop this streak of bullshit and all you newbs criticize for the wrong reasons/
Your just increasin the humility in the humanity that is representing the community/
So say what you know and dont say shit that you dont comprehend/
Do that this shit could be the end/

yj
hare jordan
nacho

feedback please

didnt seem that complicated... but i feel ya.. everyones all like.. up vocab, up vocab.. when the piece is fine the way it is with average vocab.. shit look at biggie and 2pac they didnt always use complex words to get across there point.. they just spoke from the heart and felt what they said.. but... there is a reason to up your vocab.. read a lil.. you will be able to express your.. feelings alot better if you use more descriptive words.. anyways.. ill get to critiqin the piece.. it was an ok drop.. some lines didnt make sense to me like:
"None do and curse but all your shit is worse and not real that is in this universe"
anyways.. plz return the fav and up one of my pieces (in my sig)