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Cause im dope-like-that

FB's punches like played jokes... they only slightly amuse-us
N' only ice he carries...is the shit to cover his cuts and bruises (avi)
His beggin' for hard blows... like porn-stars on high pay
Try to bond with me, ya won't haf the chance to "die another day"
Sayin his on my level, but his tresspassin on unfamilair territory
Pourin cold water on my dick in tha mornin... only way he'll take my glory*
Say you've had enough, like spoiled kids gettin force fed to fatten up
Every time he want's a vote, reaction he gets is "Time to saddle up"
Finishin FB's career faster than food at Ethiopians free-all-you-can-eat drives
Cause i fuck up this pussy worse than fingering bitches with kitchen-knifes

Waitin for you...

AYO HOMIE LISTEN

ayo x you talk alot of shit but ya not ill duh/
dis guys is so soft i can beat him half to deaf wit a feather pillow/
on the real duh battling me i dont think dis guy is well/
he must be high as hell oh well/
ill beat him wit cat swinging it by its tail/
when i beat em i would say i dont give a damn/
but i dont know what a damn is to give it/
dudes ask me why dis cat is so ugly and fat/
cause i cut off his neck glued his head back and left him like dat/
he needs to go back to the north pole ya look a like santa/
for i mark ya face like a jack-o-latern/
da way i beat dis cat would make god say god dammit/

lol alright...

votes...uppin x1

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damn will some body fuckin vote ayo try to get dudes to vote damn.............................................. ...

aye yo, i can't vote yet, but this is how i see it.

.X.
nice flow, punches hit hard and it all flows smothly.
opener was tight, never seen someone diss on someone elses avatar before. nice

Fyreboy
it had flow but the words didn't rhyme quite right. its like you tried to flow together words that didn't rhyme and you had to say em all retarded (i.e. for i mark ya face like a jack-o-latern/
da way i beat dis cat would make god say god dammit/)

vote= .X.

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X's Verse
FB's punches like played jokes... they only slightly amuse-us
N' only ice he carries...is the shit to cover his cuts and bruises (avi)
His beggin' for hard blows... like porn-stars on high pay
Try to bond with me, ya won't haf the chance to "die another day"
Sayin his on my level, but his tresspassin on unfamilair territory
Pourin cold water on my dick in tha mornin... only way he'll take my glory*
Say you've had enough, like spoiled kids gettin force fed to fatten up
Every time he want's a vote, reaction he gets is "Time to saddle up"
Finishin FB's career faster than food at Ethiopians free-all-you-can-eat drives
Cause i fuck up this pussy worse than fingering bitches with kitchen-knifes

Straight Shit..
Dope punches
Good flow
Awesome Structure
Overall.........24/20

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fyreboy's verse
ayo x you talk alot of shit but ya not ill duh/
dis guys is so soft i can beat him half to deaf wit a feather pillow/
on the real duh battling me i dont think dis guy is well/
he must be high as hell oh well/
ill beat him wit cat swinging it by its tail/
when i beat em i would say i dont give a damn/
but i dont know what a damn is to give it/
dudes ask me why dis cat is so ugly and fat/
cause i cut off his neck glued his head back and left him like dat/
he needs to go back to the north pole ya look a like santa/
for i mark ya face like a jack-o-latern/
da way i beat dis cat would make god say god dammit/

Wack verse
No structure
no punches
no personals
weak flow..
Overal....4/20

Vote-.X.
Fucka Explanation
X KILLLED FYREBOY

^Cheers...

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well......X u came ok.....not great but ok.....
Fyer pan....U came wak as hell.....
X takes this every where.....better punches-flo-meti4's.......not much else to throw in here...a mediocre drop....but fryin pan was sub par by far......not good at all...both elevate

vote- X

This was a case where flow really mattered.... Fyre's weird rhymes and lack of flow really detracted from his verse.

Other than that X had better punches and wordplay. I liked:

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Try to bond with me, ya won't haf the chance to "die another day"

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103069

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fyre boy bit of eminem,

he must be high as hell oh well/
ill beat him wit cat swinging it by its tail/

an changed a few words on another line!!!

nethertheless
X came way harder in this battle, his punches hit a lot harder, an it was a pretty easy victory!!!

Blow out.....X had hard hitting punches on every line.... good structure... good flow.....overall good verse

FB....Structure....off...flow... off.....Barely had attempts at punches...overall sucked

vote-X

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