16 for my Queen (<-- What a gay name)
 

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&postid=1053150
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103014
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&postid=1053178

By the look in your eyes it’s clear we were meant to be together
And We could make our sunshine even during the worst weather
Incredible sex life, all night, but we can past that
Cuz other couples problems is something we laugh at
In fact that, is just something we use to become stronger
See it as competition just bcuz we know we can last longer
Together all day and inseparable all night
We aint gotta have friends cuz everything is all right
If something’s on my mind it shows and you notice
No matter what it is you can solve it and I know this
Your there for me whenever, I’m there for you forever
We’d both drop anything just to be Together
Never have a problem cuz we never have a reason to
Nothing but trust and love for me that’s why I believe in you
Enough trust between eachother there’s no need to say you love me
And I swear to god, I’ll never let anyone or anything take you away from me

you stuck to the subject well...and I saw some multiez...the flow was good...vocab wasn't great but it will suffice...overall this was a decent drop...stay up and keep doin' ya thing son...

Upppppp

It was pretty good. It had a lot of feeling to it. I think the flow was a little off, but wordplay was good. Nice drop.