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Born To Kill Vs. Blak Woods (Sound Boy Murder)
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not my best shit.....
ayo, aight.... who tha hell do you think you was born ta kill// try murderin yaself fa thinking you was born wit skill// you a bore fa real// you wastin ya time, you get took out from da neck// be thankful you just gettin blessed wit text// huston tex... theres a problem wit that// too many wanna be rappers, that's just fake and wack// it's obivious to me that you conceal your gay// and you a headhunta nigga, huh... anyway// you just keep foolin ya'self cause we all see through you// and you too can see that ya lyrics are "doo doo"// are you sure that this is the career you want to choose// get beat, battered, and bruised// I'll thump thump thump (B2K) that ass, shake ya shit real loose// I haven't texted in a while.. i think it shows but here you go check out my audios to kat's vote vote vote! http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102425 |
He's from the hottest part in Cali, but spittin poor sound...
Forced ta live tha street life, cuz his fuckin house burned down. It's that way with Cali, always fires for acres or mudslides... Alot like Blak's rhymes, disasters from which ya wanna hide. I shouldn't even be doing this, he's nothing to me, no good... But my fireplace is empty, so I'll chainsaw tha Blak Woods. He can keep me warm, on these cold winter nights, how nice... Now shut the fuck up and burn, think again, it'll happen twice. So you won't want a rematch, your merking will be outstanding... Cuz everyone else is in rap, while ya entry is still in tha planning. Nah, scrap that, those plans have been laid to waste, like you... Cold lounging in a dumpster, ya got sleepy while looking for food. So lemme end this by dwelling, not on ya life but ya rhyme skill... Everyone knows it, but I'll put it in print...It sucks and always will. |
Born To Kill - Nothing Really Out Standing A Few
Punches Here And There, Decent Flow, Good Structure An Overall Decent Verse... Blak Woods......Stick To Audio...No Punches Ok Flow Horrible Structure...You Really Need To Work On Ya Punches.... Vote= Born To Kill Blah, I Can't Poll But Could Ya Please Vote On This Battle. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103917 |
erm...pretty one sided actually definately...born had a much more complex stronger verse with decent punches wheras the other guy didnt really have much to me that stood out...but im sure its just u need to batle more and soon y'ull be killin
He's from the hottest part in Cali, but spittin poor sound... Forced ta live tha street life, cuz his fuckin house burned down. ^^^borns best nice battle v/Born To Kill...(i got sum probs polling so can a mod pop the poll plz) cud u hit this up plz http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...404#post1051404 |
Uppin for votes...
Should be 1-0 for Dick Tator's vote... But a mod ain't got to this yet. Keep em coming. Peace |
Blak Woods
Battlin someone like Born, You should know better.. I know you havent texted in a while...But this was, exceptionally simplistic..a little to, for my taste. And if that wasnt enough you hardly packed punches, Let alone..personals. You had some minor concepts..but didnt worked them.. ..Out well.. you should n could have done better. Overall below average.. Born to Kill Basically you did what you had to do.. Nothin flashy or real complex..kept it fairly simple.. But you came with the nessacery punches. The lines around Cali worked well n connected, Well to that 'fireplace' line..nice punch. Overall u just edged it with better punches.. & every other catagory basically. Overall Good. One sided. Vote: Born To Kill |
Born to kill got this pretty easily,
few nice lines, harder hittin punches, better flow, just overall a better verse, blak woods didnt cum hard at all, pretty basic verse, needs to work on structure and punches, overall born to kill easily wins vote= born to kill can you hit these up with honest votes plz so hard for "newbies" to get votes around here http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103845 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104130 |
yo ite,
born to kill gets this easy did wat he had to do not as hard as u can come man but not a bad spit include more personals, blak your punches rly lacked man work on them, i seen you do alot better,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,that simple. plz both hit this heated shit up with an honest vote http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...811#post1054811 .......thx.........pz |
Well Born to Kill.....You came through with a flawless victory.
Blak woods you had a cool little set up going but the /'s have got to go. Work on making all of your lines a punch you had a lot of filler there. Born you just hit consistently with punches and they all connected so.........Blak Woods wins the battle!=) Nah I'm just playing....Vote? http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103997 |
I shouldn't even be doing this, he's nothing to me, no good...
But my fireplace is empty, so I'll chainsaw tha Blak Woods. ^^^^B2K...nice line.....good wordplay.....nice punches......better flow....better structure.... Blak....Too Basic...bad flow...and structure.... basically elevate vote-B2k |
nice battle by both im lookin at this battle as if yall were battling each other on stage of whatever
ill break it down line for line BLAK WOODS VERSE who tha hell do you think you was born ta kill// try murderin yaself fa thinking you was born wit skill// you a bore fa real// you wastin ya time, you get took out from da neck// be thankful you just gettin blessed wit text// yo shits aiight man.. kinda basic but looks like you were concerned with talkin shit rather than commin up with punchlines talkin shit huston tex... theres a problem wit that// too many wanna be rappers, that's just fake and wack// it's obivious to me that you conceal your gay// and you a headhunta nigga, huh... anyway// you just keep foolin ya'self cause we all see through you// and you too can see that ya lyrics are "doo doo"// pretty elementary.. but i wont hold it against you seeign that you just talkin shit to the nigga are you sure that this is the career you want to choose// get beat, battered, and bruised// I'll thump thump thump (B2K) that ass, shake ya shit real loose// yo man this verse was ok.. noting special it wasnt bad but it was aiight man ill give you a 4.5/10 on that one born to kills verse He's from the hottest part in Cali, but spittin poor sound... Forced ta live tha street life, cuz his fuckin house burned down. lol funny shit.. nice use of current events to form a diss It's that way with Cali, always fires for acres or mudslides... Alot like Blak's rhymes, disasters from which ya wanna hide. I shouldn't even be doing this, he's nothing to me, no good... But my fireplace is empty, so I'll chainsaw tha Blak Woods. pretty decent He can keep me warm, on these cold winter nights, how nice... Now shut the fuck up and burn, think again, it'll happen twice. So you won't want a rematch, your merking will be outstanding... Cuz everyone else is in rap, while ya entry is still in tha planning. Nah, scrap that, those plans have been laid to waste, like you... Cold lounging in a dumpster, ya got sleepy while looking for food. So lemme end this by dwelling, not on ya life but ya rhyme skill... Everyone knows it, but I'll put it in print...It sucks and always will. this shit was kind of elementary.. also your wordplay was nothing special shit was pretty basic actually vote: i got to give this battle to blak woods.. this battle was sort of close.. however the shit that set it apart for me was that blak woods verse seemed like he was going more at born to kill.. born to kill alot of your verse seemed like you were talkin to blak woods in the second person.. theres nothing really wrong with that its just that blak woods verse seemed more like it was directed at you harder |
i guess born to kill, sounded better, anyway it was tight!
Give an opinion and a VOTE plz on this http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...442#post1046442 |
btk takes it obviosuly. other cat came real unexperienced...just rhymin and flowin...nothin to clever or ne thing.....he'll get the hang of it, just read more battles...also structure was wack
btk came the opposite....he knows what he needs to do......came witty and a little personal and just showed the kid he had no chance in hell. vote BTK both of you guys please hit this up, i took the time to hit up your battle!! http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104090 |
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