Gangsta One Vs Brendan
 

10-14 lines, I spit first.

He's on a first grade level, that's why One's his last name
Dude needs to spit on an escalator just to elevate his game
I'll knock this kid out for so long, make his head snap back
when he comes too his Lebron James jersey will be a Throw Back
You rap about guns and jewels when you've got neither
Shit, the only ice he's got is in a tray in his freezer
I bring Grade A beef when I battle, that new to him
This guy used to imitation beef, more like a slimjim
You want me to end it quick dog? I'll make you beg
This fag couldn't 'de-feet' me if he cut of my legs!
You know what? I've said enough, this battle is done
Now you and my ass can play spin the bottle, one-on-one.

A'igh' checkin in droppin soon.............................................. .................................................. ..

Check it...

Ma dopeness gonna leave ya gaspin', like 2 double-gauges blastin
Lyrical razas smashin' unmaskin, ya death, Ima fuckin' assassin

Ya a guy, but a mopin' dyke, announcin' ya rim jobs like it was Open Mic*
Ya don' have a hope sight, ya can' match ma unbroken might
Take ya 3-0 record like a stolen bike, Ima smash ya like ya was a broken light

Ya, u a Student*, but ya steppin on broken glass, I rip herbs too fast
Ya undeated record is now tha past, ya rhymes are jus' a pile of broken mass

Nigga, now ya got ma shi' started, don' commit suicide, ya should know Im cold-hearted
Asses are ya target, but emceez check ma verse, n' leave yo's disregarded

Ya record is flyin, but tha's where it ends, now ya dyin
Mt.Sickness-minded Ima climbin, an' ya jus' walkin ya ass back ta RHODE ISLAND!!

A'igh' kets see how this shi' goes down...

* Open Mic, get it??????

An' he is from Rhode Islan' so tha's pretty self explanitory....................................... ...................................

Whoa!
Brendan wins this battle in a big way....
He had a smooth flow to his drop and his wordplay was killer.
Ilike the Lebron Line and you had a ton of wit in your drop good shit.

Gangsta I like the street shit but you gotta bring it a little more clever. Don't just comeout blasitn with your twelve gauges and shit. Hit em with some shit to make em think you know?

Hot shit boys, Brendan gets the W.
YOU VOTE NOW..........
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brendan took this imo.. he had the better disses.. shit was funny

gangsta one you had nice wordplay

however i just felt like brendan came nicer with disses like this

"He's on a first grade level, that's why One's his last name
Dude needs to spit on an escalator just to elevate his game
I'll knock this kid out for so long, make his head snap back
when he comes too his Lebron James jersey will be a Throw Back
You rap about guns and jewels when you've got neither
Shit, the only ice he's got is in a tray in his freezer"

now brendan if you would go back and poll vote in that battle of mine that you voted on but didnt poll vote then ill hit up a poll vote in this battle

never mind im droppin my poll vote now............................................... .................................................. ...................

Yep, already went back and did that.

Could have said it better myself

what a fucking merk
vote definitly goes to brendan

holy shit

this brendan cat is the real deal

he fucked this dude up

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Gangsta, I felt like you were talking more in general unlike brendan who was more aware of what is target was and was not only aiming but actually shooting punches. Original too......

Opener:B
Closer:B (ugh! I think I got it)
Punches:B
Metas:Did'nt recognise any
Flow:B


Overal: My vot goes to BRENDAN

Bump for the final vote........................
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BRENDAN - won this one for me

BRENDAN - better punches for me
STRUCTURE - i liked brendans better even thou '''ONE'' was good too.
OVERALL - brendan

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