doc_knock vs. oCANTi
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due one hour from checkin no crew, d/, hate you spit first good luck .................................................. ... |
This is my check in
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um...you're late...better hurry up.....
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Love ya life while u have it
stop rappin it's ya bad habit lock away your keyboard, literally store it in ya cabinet I don't deal jokes about faggots my repertoire of words has expanded when I rap I use all sorts of fabric/you attach to static just consider me one of the 9-11 planes that landed I'm a female doin big things, I'm not a scarecrow I have a brain only way you'll make it is if you hurry and learn how to sing lets remind you westcoast is not on the map cali ain't bringin it and neither will your pack(crew) life right now is about pimpin and killin well you need to kill them pimples so aim and start drillin then maybe we can start chillin you tell me about yo life, i'LL TELL YOU ABOUT MY LIFE and then we hook you up with them singing lessons alright I like to tell stories.....if yall can't feel that I don't know what to tell ya, better yet I don't know what to tell myself I'm sick of yall voting for simple punchlines that require no thought. Join the campaign: This is not any many miny mo......stop b-shittin and properly vote |
Oh I'm sorry....not... just shut up and drop. You're feeding off of me any way so calm down and follow the leader.......................
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your repotoire may expand, but mine's gon get explicit/
i can sum up ya verse in one simple word: BULLSHIT/ lock away my keyboard? why dont you lock away ya mouth/ no one gives a shit about those stories you talkin bout/ cali aint bringin it? oh i think u made a mistake/ ill smack ya stupid little ass until ya spirit breaks/ chillin? fuck that, i wouldnt chill with you fa dough/ you arent good at illin, just go outside and be a hoe/ you may not be a scarecrow, but you aint a female empowered/ cuz you try to fake toughness, but you really like the lion, a coward/ im fuckin sick, ill, dope, bitchin, anything you can think to say/ talkin bout ya life? bitch i aint got all day/ while you out doin big things, im signed to a record deal/ you bringin a story style? fuck that, aint nothin there to feel/ you talk shit for an hour, but yo im a rappa with class/ and oh, one more thing, some them singin lessons up ya ass ...aight....vote |
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This battle was good, but...
Ocanti: Your verse was good, but I didn't really feel your story this time. You needed to say some stuff that hit home harder, cause your punches weren't that effective. Oh and when you talk about the both of you in your verse, it kinda weakens it. But everything else in your verse was pretty good. Doc Knock: Your verse was good. I liked the way you attacked her lines and made them your own metas. Punches coulda been a little more effective, but you had decent wordplay. Vote: Doc Knock |
aight battle....
ocanti.... you came pretty weak..... your flow and structure was off punches were gay..no offense you rhymed like 8 lines 2gether Doc.... better structure... good flow punches were decent.. could of been better You fed big time... but you still had a better verse vote-Doc hit this up with an honest vote....thanks http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104078 |
Doc took this with harder hitting punches and a more creative verse. oCANTis verse was lacking in punches and the floe was kinda fucked.
Pleased rop an honest one here http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103729 |
THAT WAS A GOOD BATTLE
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Ocanti you have improved since me and you battled.. good work keep it up girl..but unfortunatly 168 had a better verse with better punches that landed harder and where more on point then your where, keep elevating you will get there aventualy..No hate just a vote
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Can both of you please return the favor and vote honestly on my battle... I took the time you should too..
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104281 Thank You.. Much Appriciated Peace |
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