My Heart Cryeth Over Thee
 

Dis is an Old Piece...I am about 2 SwitCh it up though




My Heart Drowns in its own pool of Love
Your Presense gives me chills and i get eroused from your hugs
My LOVE

My Love you are my light My Shine when there is no Sun
Im Feellin you emotionally, Spiritually and Physically
With Energy my love your love for Infinity im fallin for you instantly
Us forever we can get thru any Obsticals trying to defeat us
I sit and think of your sensual Kiss ya soft lips oooo I miss thiss
I keep Reminisin of how life was when u where here N
I cant Breathe with out your warm body against mines in the Morning Waking up to you saying Good Morning

If Only,i could see you once again
Just 1 more time too touch your lips
1 more time with u i could Laugh with
Id Be Delighted and Let u Finally R.i.P
My Heart Cryeth Over Thee

nice drop. it had pretty good flow and pretty good vocab as well, i can tell there is feeling in here wich is great. However i think you opener could use some work.

Thanks.....



Im tryin my best......keep the feedbackk



its helpin me...


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