Handcuffs v play-jah-rizer
 

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no bull shit votes
spit quick
Best battle of the century!

checkin in, foo.................
you gonna get smoked..i bet you even be a white boy.! hahaha..gonna spit in a few

checkin in
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I'm gonna kick you in the scrotum sack,
the staple that wrinkly thing to your back,
I like napkins, you probably use your shirt,
you are gayer then that gay puppets, Ernie and Bert.,
You are half white and half irish and 100% Black,
All of your races mixed make your 478 times as wack,
you muth fucking, dick licking, cock fucking, ass licking goat fucker,
Instead of this hard hitting battle you wanna go out and blow a trucker,
You are as scared as kid in a porn shop,
You didn't even think of your shit off the top,

we can end this battle now, and let you lose painlessly/
or i can fuck you wit a pow and verbally rape you anally/
you call you self hand cuffs cuz you learned from your mommeny/
i be reppin D-City while you be reppin harmeny/
i can make up words, i got the right/
on you i be droppin turds if you continue the fight/
i slash you grill piece with a rusty bottle/
i kill 20+ fools a week and parents still want me as a role model/
you a cockroach, i turn on the light and you scuttle/
my words leave you unable to drop a rebuttle

peace foot cuffs

Ok here is how I score this battle
Opening:Play-Jah-rizer got this section is was not too basic like handcuffs his opening was very boring. "0we can end this battle now, and let you lose painlessly/ or i can fuck you wit a pow and verbally rape you anally"

Punches: Play-Jah_Rizer his was semi entertaining and witty handcuffs was just corny.

Metaphors: Play-Jah_Rizers: Brutal very brutal

Structure: Tie Both were easy to follow

Flow: Play-Jah-Rizer his flow was just flat out nasty Handcuffs what were you talking about?????

Ending: Play-Jah-Rizer

Winner: Play-Jah_Rizer murked this nigga

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awww. dawg, you are dopely muRkin' me.
~peace~
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this was an easybattl to judge

flow: play
wordplay: play
punches: play
structure: play

Cuffs... you seem to want to be too munh like eminem. your structure was lacking, in that, it didn't seem to flow correctly, also you didn't seem to want to win by dissing him.. anyone can call somebody names...

play... very nice verse. you came at that cat throughout the whole thing, that made the diffrence. way to use wordplay...

vote play

return the favor

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102425

uppin......2...word thanx for votes............................................. .................................................. ..................

oh poop, now the crips are gonna get me
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vote on these battles!!

heres the low down on ur battle!!

U both were ayt in this battle but I think Handcuffs took this cause urs were easier 2 read and had better structure but yer punches were that great!!

play-jah-rizer ur probably the best newb i have seen!! u had a good structure and flow but the punches werent hitting hard enough!!

overall vote- handcuffs

play got dis one he had better wordplay, flows and and harder punches, he jus came alot harder....

vote play


hit dis one up plz.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104979

ayo thanks for the feed....vote fuckers!.....
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