im a 14 yearold rapper, this is my first track "TAKE THAT"
 

Im a 14 yearold white rapper and just started this whole rap shit
heres my first track(this track was recorded using a computer mic and sum unexpensive software-but ill be getting sum high quality equip. in the near future)

Give me some good feedback and tips, (pls dont hate)
thnx,
claM Chowder



http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/clamchowdermusic.htm

ummm... good try. your mixing is horrible. itll get better with time.. your flow is not to bad.. sound like you been writing for a while..... coo shit..

elevate

thnx for the feed back

lets hear sum more

nice for ya 1st got room for improvement post is right need work on dat mixin keep ya head up doe you be gettin better return the fav. kid reply to inventin the game by me tell me what you think thnx

iight i will
uppin

Keep working on flowing with the beat, and can't hear ya much, but you learn by your mistakes so keep spittin'...

pce

lol.......u fa sho got skills lil man.........flow a lil skaky, but your potential is off the chain......u gotta deeper voice than most on this site,lol..........nice shit, good lyrics and rhyme structure.........keep at it........oh yeah why is your name clam chowder?

lol it came to me in a bowl of soup....any more feed back?

fuck a mix...but yea elavate...

I got this beat... I downloaded it off of kazaa about a year or 2 ago... u got decent flows... plus u need to work on ur mixin... plus u need to up ur vocals.

yeh....my quality is shit...so i'll let that go....work on ur sorta choppy flow......the lyrics are ehh...even the bars or something...and....yeh...wtf witht he sounds being louder than you...:) dope voice...soundin sorta robotic....but im assumin thats the quality...nice lyrics and shit...u got potential...nice first audio....keep dropping...
~1~

damm dawg that beat is on point. u came decent though my guy just get better equipment that mic is garbage. but ya flows was coo. keep doin whatchu do