Everytime-Hypnotic
 

this was my quick spit song...ppl said i went like twista and i was snappin...im gonna remake it n all but tell me what yall think
im checkin up on a new fast rappin style

this is apart of my mixtape and itz near the middle of my soundclick

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/6/h...axodusmusic.htm

feedback is appreciated

uppin

Its kinna catchy...

--propz...

but it sounded like u was talking instead of rhyming...

and u tried a little to hard to remake Eminem's "Superman"

So you lose cool points for that

damn!!! soundclick.... i'll try later,,,