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Wr!te Mind 01-05-04 10:10 PM

Wr!te Mind vs. Pr3cise
 
10 lines,
No c/h/dr

EXPLAINED VOTES

ready when you are

Pr3cise 01-05-04 10:30 PM

are you almost ready to drop.....im almost done keying......
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Pr3cise 01-05-04 10:34 PM

Get smashed wit ease, I say words louder than action speaks
you're ur a junky, buggin off downers, crack n speed
tappin’ keys, wit ashy knees, needle tracks, n’ nasty teeth,
his whole social life is revolvin around his dad’s PC
Write you're fuckin garbage bums dicking trash cans
Your style has passed hands worse than high school class rants
Ya whole rap styles kitty litter a shitty mixture I’m mini-hitler, you’re as frightening as titty twisters
get hit wit a stray, from rocket fire from missle arrays,
you’re a fag workin at Foot Locker... officially gay

Pr3cise 01-05-04 10:37 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by Pr3cise

Write you're fuckin garbage bums dicking trash cans


should be,

Write you're fuckin garbage LIKE street bums dickin trash cans

Wr!te Mind 01-05-04 10:39 PM

^^^
Funny

I came here not caring, knowing this kids pleasure is to Wr!te
So if winning was my bearing, then my measurements Precise
This bitch needs to face history because I leave him in my dust
The only reason u taste victory is because I wrote it on my nuts
He thinks its good that he can fight me, but he’s tethered to worse
And I didn’t want to take you lightly, but you feathered your verse
I could have came and blown down your house, but this isn’t a fantasy
You could write my name on your mouse, you still couldn’t handle me
Fuck this shit, the kid is whack and I ‘m trying to suck
They say “Losing is for pussy’s” and this kids dying to fuck

Wr!te Mind 01-05-04 10:41 PM

Alright upping for v---------------------------------------------------------------------






















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Pr3cise 01-05-04 10:43 PM

who is this whats your alias....pm me
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Wr!te Mind 01-05-04 11:24 PM

Up x2

son latley it's been a huge pain in my ass to up a post with one hundred characters so I'll waster the spce to bitch about it becuas ei have nothing better to do

Tyler Durden 01-05-04 11:29 PM

One Sided Battle.....

Punches.....This Person Had Punches On Every Line......Wr!te
Multies....This Person Had Multies on Every Line....Wr!te
Flow.....Perfect.....Wr!te...Structure Good As Well
Creativity.....Wr!te.....Very Much So

This bitch needs to face history because I leave him in my dust
The only reason u taste victory is because I wrote it on my nuts

^^ Fuckin Sick...

Pre....Try Not To Ryhme Four Lines Together

Vote-WR!TE M!ND

idyLLic 01-05-04 11:42 PM

Wr!te Mind is no newbie, that's for sure...

Better wordplay, better punches, just overall had a better verse....not hate towards Pr3cise though, you had a decent verse...I'd just say work on fitting in more punches, too many fillers....

nice shit Wr!te...

Vote=Wr!te Mind

vote on my battle w/ Echo if y'all could...

.::[oNe]::.

Wr!te Mind 01-06-04 12:26 AM

Up Up
Up Up
Can Only Go Up......................














Damn.....I didn't think Shania Twain would pop in my head here............oh well, uppin for votes

SaM sKILLeT 01-06-04 12:50 AM

alright, Precise, your verse was good. It was just filled with multis. But, punches win battles, and yours lacked hard hittin punches in most lines... That foot locker line was probably your best.
Write, you had some clever lines, solid multis, good punches, overall better verse.

Vote: Wr!te
(sadly, I can't poll vote yet)

It'd be cool if someone could check out this battle: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...18&pagenumber=1

Wr!te Mind 01-06-04 09:58 AM

Up x3................................................ .............


If you can poll vote it would be appreciated........................



Vote, vote, vote, vote, 100 characters vote, read, vote,,,,i won

Mr W.Rite 01-06-04 09:59 AM

precise win the multis battles
but write def won the everything else battle
precise i've seen your shit before..its pretty good..
but write is a vet.and showed he is a vet in the battle
his punches hit harder..and his flow was on point
pre..had good flow as well..but punhces didnt really hit as hard

write had good wordplay and creativity
poll vote= write mind

good read from both here

MyNd. FuLL 01-06-04 10:01 AM

Quote:
Originally posted by Mr W.Rite
precise win the multis battles
but write def won the everything else battle
precise i've seen your shit before..its pretty good..
but write is a vet.and showed he is a vet in the battle
his punches hit harder..and his flow was on point
pre..had good flow as well..but punhces didnt really hit as hard

write had good wordplay and creativity
poll vote= write mind

good read from both here



polling this vote
keep forgettin i cant poll under that name yet...


vote=write mind...


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