~Championship~ Feeble Minded VS Allegory
 

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Verses Due: Thursday 1-08-04 11:59pm EST
Voting Ends: Sunday 1-11-04 11:59pm EST

-NO Beefing
-NO Feeding
-NO Recycling
-NO Biting

All I Ask Is That You Both Come Out Swinging A Make This Shit
An Ill Battle....

If Not... I Will Be Forced To Smack The Weaker One With My
12 inch Penis... Yes, It Is 12 Inches

Good Luck

just for the record, my original verse was posted at time: 12:02, at which point allegory pm'd me 20 minutes later saying that i wrote to little (my original was 12 lines long). so we agreed to due limit: 1 a.m. If he fails to meet the second due limit i will be pissed.

. . and here we go 'gory. .





I've heard things from chrit. . & you said you rap for the fame
. . but if thats the case why the fuck're you snatchin a name ?
I pressed allegory to drop hard, & he said he's the new thug
but I tried to d.a.r.e. him & he said. . . "I don't do drugs"
a simple fuck . . no matter what you can't debate perfection
cuz `Gore will lose this. . like he did in the '98 election. .
I create affection. . after this i'll own u, have the right to boss
cuz allegory uses "feeble". . as a nemonic device for loss!
& its consequential. . . that I'll turn allegory non-potential
cuz 'gory nobody knows of your skill. . like it's confidential . .
like bad christians. . you aren't half as good as u vow to be
shit. . you only got past M~M on a mere technicality. .
I merk u & bring u back to life, this is how the story ends...
I'll send u from ashes to ashes. . like this is a crematorium
wack fuck, i only feel drizzles but u said ur startin ya reign. .
only place you give it your all is in the first parta ya name
i start to proclaim, i'll beat u in battle, no matter where it is
cuz when it comes to his fate, feebz wrote the narrative. .
& it doesn't matter why. . fact is i'll defeat you at this. .
trapts quote is a fake personal
. . cuz you didn't steal a name, fact is you cease to exist

i'll rhyme to this pest, until he knows that i am the best
and he's half-steppin so much that he'd fail a sobriety test
i'll leave this guy in a mess, so he won't even flow again
on a scale of one to ten... he's lighter than an ethiopian
peeps say he has nice raps, but watch the queer kid fail
cuz i wouldnt even buy that if it was on clearance sale
Feeble's weird and frail, we'll see his jaw drop when he's losin
n i dont even need stencils or pads to draw that conclusion
start acceptin it dude, dont be mad that im tellin the truth
just be mad at the fact that im sooo much better than u...
im bettin its true, you're just another man that tries to spit...
who knows his role... as a detective... and is actin like a dick.
this faggot guy gets ripped, and now it seems he's scared
cuz he has a broken home... when his doll house needs repairs
the geek'll tear; he wants to get buck but when i spit better
his blood'll be rushin so much, it breaks Emitt Smith's record
i'm rappin to the guy, i dont think that the faggots gettin by
cuz he's only the sentimental favorite of an apathetic guy
i'll be rockin his frame so the whore has to get ripped
he just talk a big game, like announcers at sports championships
i have unmatchable wit, im damagin quick cuz im an evil rebel
while ya lifes an open book, with a 1st grade reading level
dont test the illest style, cuz im the best at spittin, while
your just a pedophile who tried to molest his inner child
this veteran is wild, yet Feeble Minded isnt seein me
i'll take him to school... so he can drop out n opt to get his GED
start controlin ya jealousy, cuz you know when ya testin me
you'll die... and i'll give everyone amnesia when ya only a memory

Dere Dude..Sorry For Da Delay....

Just Got Your Pm...yep....Gh05t!...

we agreed to 20 through pm's and you spit 28. whatever.

ok... lets see

First Allegory... i really thought you came with alot of nice concepts
and good punches... everything was worded pretty well

Feebs... i enjoyed reading your verse.. you have definatley
elevated.. you remind me of me & Mystery... you have a good
combination of personals, punches & humor...

so i vote for Feebs only because it seemed that Allegory's verse
wasn't really directed at Feebs... Allegory could have used his
verse against anybody... if he would have personalized it to fit
Feebs then he would have won...

Vote Feebs

V/ Feeble

Iunno...i thought Allegory came simplistic with his punches....not complex or anything....he had a few nice punches, but the rest was alot of filler....like volve said....not direct punches = verse gainst anyone....that hurt your verse alot....

Feeble....you came good....i think you came with some nice direct punches....but you still had a few weak lines....didnt like your opener.....but your closer was nice....you won with some better concepts and punches

Quotable :

i start to proclaim, i'll beat u in battle, no matter where it is
cuz when it comes to his fate, feebz wrote the narrative. .

I'm just going to say I was slightly disappointed in this.
Felt Feeble could have improved his verse greatly by different wordings.

Allegory- I'm not even going to get into that verse for reasons I told Feeble of on aim.

^3-0 you

feebles verse was one the best I've seen from him while allegorys was good but boring, few allright punches but nothing i havent seen before..... nice battle but i expected more for the heavyweight title bout......

VOTE FEEBLE

hmmm, wasnt exactly something you'd expect in a heavyweight match but it is what it is....anyways lets get to voting...

Allegory: I doubt thats the original...pretty weak to steal his name but w/e, thats not a factor that would effect you in voting, i didnt really like your verse, had some nice parts but overall it was a type of verse you would see in FL or EFL.....

Feeble: Nice verse, not your best but your definately getting better, many wouldve expected more from you both but w/e, you had some nice personals and a nice verse, had some humor in it and it was more then enough to beat allegory

Vote-Feeble

You Faggot Fuck... Change Your Name You Fucking Poser

Evolve

lmao @ the name. if your not in origin ill thats just gay .

ConGrats Feeble .. You Deserve To Win


Sudieu

...I want first dibs with Feeble after the tourney...

Feebs had better/ harder hittin punches with
wittier lyrics. Evolves right he does have the same
style as us... sorta. Feebles gets most elevated
of the year tie w/ Walter Wall.

vote - Feeble

Allegory nice concept just not agressively dissin enough

Vote - Feeble
Not a championship worthy verse from him, but an over all better verse
Allegory didn't take this seriously and came with mostly played non direct punches
Feeble wins
....Lets get new matches set up