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It 01-06-04 04:04 PM

It Vs. Limitz
 
yo 10lines...
blind spit...
both drop in 30...
no d/r...hate votes...
check in...

Limitz 01-06-04 04:05 PM

im checking in................................................ ...........................................

Limitz 01-06-04 04:25 PM

Heard You Need Some Work Done On Ya Word-Play..I'll Piss Ya Facts...It Gets Sacked Ten Flips Get Passed
I Caused SOLAR ENERGY *SONNED YOU* I'll Have Ray Sayin.."I MISSED YOU DAD!"*
I Spit This With Acidic Characterisitics And Cannabalism Is Attacking This Kid.. Rappin Friends?
Here's A Saddened Clinch..You Always FOLLOW MY LINES Like A TRUE ADLIBIST
Its Real Here, No Time For Fun Now.. Leave Ya ACTIVE WORDS STUCK Like I HUNGED NOUNS..
Fuck You, Limitz KILLS IT Like BRINGING THE SUN DOWN!!
It's Just A Rotten Set.. Another Kid Off The Boughten Deck
Why The Return? Stick To Ya WRECKORD..Its Clearly Your Not GOOD AT TEXT**
U Battling Me Is A Useless Win
Ya Audios Sound Like The Flu Is Within And Ya Highest Rate Is 2 Out Of 10
Superior Wackness Gets More Blunts Than That, The Truth Would Admits
I Dont Need To Battle You.. Youd Loose To My Sis***

Explanationz:

* - "SONNED YOU" son...sun, get it?
** - your not good at TEXT... hes an audio guy
*** - this is pretty easy... losing to my sis, she sux

Limitz 01-06-04 04:27 PM

oh, btw... sorry about posting 12... i had figured i needed a good closer and i lost count of my lines, so just change the rules to 12 lines... sorry

It 01-06-04 04:34 PM

Start Off By Saying WTF Iz A Limitz...Tryna Pull A Gimick But U Cataclizmic...
Meaning U Ugly In Every Way...Banned For Cheating Ofcourse Ur a Figment...
U Wrote T.he H.uman U.nder G.od In Yer Sig...But Why...OMG Please Stop...
Your Whole Approach Was Wrong...Tried To Be Creative...& Yer Head Poped...
From Streets Of Indy-Polis...But No One Supports This...Its Wak Yer Dumb...
But Of Course Yer Homeless...U X-port No Speacial Brand...Cuz Yer A Bum...
3 Wins And 3 Losses...I guess Yer Evenly Distributed...ahha But Not Anymore...
I guess Yer Avy Speaks For It Self...Yer Depressed And NoBody Iz Felt...Yer Tore...
Imma End This Right Quick...Yer Simply A Fat Female With Small Tits...................
And Couldent Pimp Me Even If I Was Grotesquely Affiliated With Dead Pits...

It 01-06-04 04:41 PM

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Limitz 01-06-04 04:42 PM

nice spit man... good job. this bitch is uppin for votes... UPPIN #1!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

ILLunatic 01-06-04 04:44 PM

Quote:
Quoted From Limitz
Heard You Need Some Work Done On Ya Word-Play..I'll Piss Ya Facts...It Gets Sacked Ten Flips Get Passed
I Caused SOLAR ENERGY *SONNED YOU* I'll Have Ray Sayin.."I MISSED YOU DAD!"*
I Spit This With Acidic Characterisitics And Cannabalism Is Attacking This Kid.. Rappin Friends?
Here's A Saddened Clinch..You Always FOLLOW MY LINES Like A TRUE ADLIBIST
Its Real Here, No Time For Fun Now.. Leave Ya ACTIVE WORDS STUCK Like I HUNGED NOUNS..
Fuck You, Limitz KILLS IT Like BRINGING THE SUN DOWN!!
It's Just A Rotten Set.. Another Kid Off The Boughten Deck
Why The Return? Stick To Ya WRECKORD..Its Clearly Your Not GOOD AT TEXT**
U Battling Me Is A Useless Win
Ya Audios Sound Like The Flu Is Within And Ya Highest Rate Is 2 Out Of 10
Superior Wackness Gets More Blunts Than That, The Truth Would Admits
I Dont Need To Battle You.. Youd Loose To My Sis***



Ok... a bit played
Structure was horrible
Punches were ok..
Wordplay was off
Personals were lacked
Vocab...nah...not really
Overall......10/20




Quote:
Quoted From IT
Start Off By Saying WTF Iz A Limitz...Tryna Pull A Gimick But U Cataclizmic...
Meaning U Ugly In Every Way...Banned For Cheating Ofcourse Ur a Figment...
U Wrote T.he H.uman U.nder G.od In Yer Sig...But Why...OMG Please Stop...
Your Whole Approach Was Wrong...Tried To Be Creative...& Yer Head Poped...
From Streets Of Indy-Polis...But No One Supports This...Its Wak Yer Dumb...
But Of Course Yer Homeless...U X-port No Speacial Brand...Cuz Yer A Bum...
3 Wins And 3 Losses...I guess Yer Evenly Distributed...ahha But Not Anymore...
I guess Yer Avy Speaks For It Self...Yer Depressed And NoBody Iz Felt...Yer Tore...
Imma End This Right Quick...Yer Simply A Fat Female With Small Tits...................
And Couldent Pimp Me Even If I Was Grotesquely Affiliated With Dead Pits...


Dope shit IT
Nice wordplay
Vocab was good
Punches were decently hard
Personals were ok...
Overall.......14/20


Vote-IT
Simply came harder...
Better structure, vocab, punches....

Limitz....
Dont Stretch ya shit so much..
And dont be cocky
And dont use different colors in ya verse..
Makes it look stupid



Hit this up... i'm getin d/r'd against badly
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104353

Limitz 01-06-04 04:54 PM

aight. thanx for the vote dog. uppin # 2!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!

rapper_bigga 01-06-04 05:00 PM

yo i say a tie, i don't know who vote for here, i was falling more towards limitz, but i.t. just equaled everything. i say a tie.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104427
!!! CHECH THAT LINK OUT IF YA LOOKING FOR A CREW !!!

rapper_bigga 01-06-04 05:02 PM

yo limitz when did i battle you. i can't remember any battle, my minds blank. i'm gonna check that out but i cant remember any battle

It 01-06-04 05:10 PM

uppin2
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It 01-06-04 05:35 PM

uppin3
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KaYNe 01-06-04 06:04 PM

I know i cant poll vote, but im break it down anyway:


Limitz, Not a bad first spit. The punches werent brilliant, but they were far from bad. Your metas were ok, but you need to brush up on wordplay coz the creativity was there but it wasnt worded in the greatest way. multis & the rhyme scheme in general were both ok. Lacked personals & the flow was off at points.

IT, your spit looked less complex, but had a better effect. The punches were harder hitting. metas were pretty nice. multis and rhyme scheme worked effectively. It flowed nicely & you had some quite nice personals too.

Vote: It


Problem C -vs- KaYNe
^ I got a battle thats gettin slept on here. It would be much appreciated if you could drop a quick vote.

Da saviour 01-06-04 06:28 PM

vote on this and later i will vote your battle
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...442#post1046442


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