verse for an audio collab
 

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...025#post1059025

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...051#post1059051

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...069#post1059069

the beat'll be "mack bitch" and the subject is nothing in particular, just venting and flowing for the sake of keeping my skills sharp.

we came to rock spots in tinted drop tops/
until the clock stops we still set up shop/
no need to pop glocks, til the last man standing/
its a fast crash landing in the vast grand crayon/
located in illityville, the home of the brave/
we free minds of those who've grown up as slaves/
and blow up grenades in the faces of pricks/
and show the new wave with a taste with a twist/
my brain power could run london for eight hours/
no strain, our presense is shown in quake power/
i get quizzed round the clock why my name is 6-feet/
coz i'm a sick creep respociable for many sick feats/
this is strength in numbers, part two, the fucking sequal/
with added evil and a beat from seagal/
so, enough of name dropping, dont mention mine/
now its time to hand this rhyme up to strength of mind/

as you mentioned there was no particular subject, and it showed, but other then that, multis where there and easily meshed within the flow. not much to complain about as it was just a straight spit, interested in seeing something topical from you though...

flowed nicely and although no subject, still had appeal. nice vocab, and goodish structure. nice one

agreed... the flow combined with the scheme set it off.... but not keen on those kinda verses, prefer a good topic... you did execute it well,, but the vocab lacked a bit i thought..overall decent..pZ

...decent..I liked this piece alot..a little different..good centent...no topic worked out very well..good flow and multis..nice work..