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Mystery~murdera 01-06-04 07:42 PM

B.I.Detained Vs. Mystery
 
ight Brixton, i think we're
both vets, no foul play n
we understand who can
n cant vote.


in with...

B.I.Detained 01-06-04 07:45 PM

-in-

yip..agreed..
no hate
then e'1s happy

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B.I.Detained 01-07-04 05:50 AM

<<<<<< will drop tonite seen as tho i am late for work
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
this is england lol...
pz
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No feedin
no hate etc...
i threw 10 good luck pz

B.I.Detained 01-07-04 04:29 PM

thanx for being patient bra.. iight keyin!!
that was a killer shift lol--->

hear M~M's Tight..so I'd Invite him to Collab on a Mix tape if I C Fit
but shit..
how cud I do a track w/ Sumone Who's not even worth the Skit...
Straight Deficit..M~M is jus a Man Made Defect...
..w/ less Respect..than Cam Protesting his Flipping Of Concepts
Your small Rep'...defines Epitome..which Inturn is the Lowest Low
..Hoe..made Mystery's face to Green w/ Envy N still he Won't Go
M~M imitates Skilo..jus a Small Mother Fucker Reppin Twits End..
Ill Pop ya like AMEND..C Pills dont matter wen ya not Killin a Friend
..so I Send..this Murdera on My Customised Herb Green Mile...
to the claims of MM being Sick..I Agree..but he aint nuttin but Bile

Mystery~murdera 01-08-04 12:45 PM

*sigh*... Brixton, Brixton...

is on my nuts so hard if I jumped the bridge He'd Follow
So when I say you used to suck....................................
......................................I just mean that now u swallow
See Brixton's Head is hollow and how could I admonish him...
When mentioning his name in a post is an accomplishment?!
shit is nonsense kid, & For the record ya post lacked a verse
B.I. took his skill to the extreme... and went from bad to worse!
BI.s never crafted a verse, that can stand tall, or cant fall...
and if I REALLY wanted to kick ur ass.......
................................................I' d just kick Cam in the balls!
And I'm appalled by ya lack of skill, bluntly - Brixton Is Running
And boy's room bathroom stalls is the only time The British r coming!

blah keyed

Trapt Wit 01-08-04 12:48 PM

And M~M whored B.I

That verse was almost completely quotable.

Sorry Brix. this wasnt even close enough for a breakdown.

Mystery~murdera 01-08-04 12:55 PM

thanx 4 the vote...
would prefer a poll though

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Trapt Wit 01-08-04 01:01 PM

<<<<Cant poll til the admins register me yet again.
I'll be back.

B.I.Detained 01-08-04 01:39 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by Trapt Wit
And M~M whored B.I

That verse was almost completely quotable.

Sorry Brix. this wasnt even close enough for a breakdown.


dont like to moan but get of his dick
breakdown or no vote...
simple
& i feel a lil hate from you
seen as tho i soned ya in
the 1-2 tourney
anyways uppin

Trapt Wit 01-08-04 01:47 PM

God damnit....
When I say it doesnt need a breakdown it doesnt.
But here's one anyhow...
Jesus

hear M~M's Tight..so I'd Invite him to Collab on a Mix tape if I C Fit
but shit..
how cud I do a track w/ Sumone Who's not even worth the Skit...
Not a great concepts... seem partially stretched
Straight Deficit..M~M is jus a Man Made Defect...
..w/ less Respect..than Cam Protesting his Flipping Of Concepts
First line was a waste... second really doesnt connect well
Your small Rep'...defines Epitome..which Inturn is the Lowest Low
..Hoe..made Mystery's face to Green w/ Envy N still he Won't Go
This bar was really bad... I"m sorry... not good at all
M~M imitates Skilo..jus a Small Mother Fucker Reppin Twits End..
Ill Pop ya like AMEND..C Pills dont matter wen ya not Killin a Friend
Again with name dropping random people? still not a good punch
..so I Send..this Murdera on My Customised Herb Green Mile...
to the claims of MM being Sick..I Agree..but he aint nuttin but Bile
Sorry man I wasnt feeling this either

Overall this wasnt an elite worthy verse. Period

is on my nuts so hard if I jumped the bridge He'd Follow
So when I say you used to suck....................................
......................................I just mean that now u swallow
Not a great bar... the second line just doesnt wirk very well
See Brixton's Head is hollow and how could I admonish him...
When mentioning his name in a post is an accomplishment?!
Relatively filler bar here.... not saying much
shit is nonsense kid, & For the record ya post lacked a verse
B.I. took his skill to the extreme... and went from bad to worse!
Decent punch here... slightly played concept but used well as a presonal
BI.s never crafted a verse, that can stand tall, or cant fall...
and if I REALLY wanted to kick ur ass.......
................................................I' d just kick Cam in the balls!
Dope bar.... best of the battle........
And I'm appalled by ya lack of skill, bluntly - Brixton Is Running
And boy's room bathroom stalls is the only time The British r coming!
Not bad..... not good

Overall, not the best from M`M at all but still all quotable compared to BI's verse. As I said..... BI's verse does not belong in elite

Vote- M~M

B.I.Detained 01-08-04 01:49 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by Trapt Wit
God damnit....
When I say it doesnt need a breakdown it doesnt.
But here's one anyhow...
Jesus

hear M~M's Tight..so I'd Invite him to Collab on a Mix tape if I C Fit
but shit..
how cud I do a track w/ Sumone Who's not even worth the Skit...
Not a great concepts... seem partially stretched
Straight Deficit..M~M is jus a Man Made Defect...
..w/ less Respect..than Cam Protesting his Flipping Of Concepts
First line was a waste... second really doesnt connect well
Your small Rep'...defines Epitome..which Inturn is the Lowest Low
..Hoe..made Mystery's face to Green w/ Envy N still he Won't Go
This bar was really bad... I"m sorry... not good at all
M~M imitates Skilo..jus a Small Mother Fucker Reppin Twits End..
Ill Pop ya like AMEND..C Pills dont matter wen ya not Killin a Friend
Again with name dropping random people? still not a good punch
..so I Send..this Murdera on My Customised Herb Green Mile...
to the claims of MM being Sick..I Agree..but he aint nuttin but Bile
Sorry man I wasnt feeling this either

Overall this wasnt an elite worthy verse. Period

is on my nuts so hard if I jumped the bridge He'd Follow
So when I say you used to suck....................................
......................................I just mean that now u swallow
Not a great bar... the second line just doesnt wirk very well
See Brixton's Head is hollow and how could I admonish him...
When mentioning his name in a post is an accomplishment?!
Relatively filler bar here.... not saying much
shit is nonsense kid, & For the record ya post lacked a verse
B.I. took his skill to the extreme... and went from bad to worse!
Decent punch here... slightly played concept but used well as a presonal
BI.s never crafted a verse, that can stand tall, or cant fall...
and if I REALLY wanted to kick ur ass.......
................................................I' d just kick Cam in the balls!
Dope bar.... best of the battle........
And I'm appalled by ya lack of skill, bluntly - Brixton Is Running
And boy's room bathroom stalls is the only time The British r coming!
Not bad..... not good

Overall, not the best from M`M at all but still all quotable compared to BI's verse. As I said..... BI's verse does not belong in elite

Vote- M~M


ya such a fukin prick...
no bar was good???
talk shit mayne & thats why
ya got banned
now go
you're not on the list
HATER

Trapt Wit 01-08-04 01:51 PM

Check the list.

I'm on it


Mystery~murdera 01-08-04 01:52 PM

lets not clog
with beefin.
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Feeble Minded 01-08-04 06:00 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by B.I.Detained
talk shit mayne & thats why ya got banned


Actually talking shit wasn't even close to the reason he got banned.

vote: M~M

B.I.. as chrit said, your verse really wasn't elite. your verses against me was much better. the random nme dropping i noticed too. . didnt make much sense.. specially the amend line, had nuthin at all to do with amend.. your lines were average . . for elevated. not elite. dont worry about it .. just keep elevating. make sure to make your bars punches .. and try to have a mixture of wittiness, dope punches, and good humor that connects well .. here you didnt have much of any ..

M~M: you did a little better in each of those areas .. the cam line was a little funny, better connecting though if he really is on cams nuts which im not sure of. good line either way. seems you halrf assed it. probably did. took this anyway without to much competition.

polled for M~M

B.I.Detained 01-08-04 08:15 PM

^^iight thanx for productive criticism
unlike Chrit

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