idyLLic VERSUS Smash
 

here are the rulees:
10 linez no hate no crew no d/r no feedin no bitin
5 bars (10 lines)
spit max 45 mins after this post
Ill go first unless u want to juss chek in and ill spit

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aight heres my verse:

I bust-slugs, send twenty to your cap now wussup-dog
leave you leakin much-blood, sorry punk u got-plugged (1)
you aint ready for the major leagues youre still trippin on your soft-drugs
yo dont be angry at me cuz your mom didnt give you enuff-love (2)

Pretendin' yous-the-best made you loose-respect
now my crew's-vexed, here goes your neck! who's-next? (3)
I dont do nothin' else but rap cuz this is what i do-best
Im the nicest take that as a fact if u didn't knew-yet (4)

slash be the one that your friends-cant-diss, that your hands-cant-hit
from montreal to san-fran-cis..co, breakin more neck then the wu clan's-mantis (5)

We all know this kids a faggot, so watch me set him straight...
flipping through a calendar is the best chance he has to get a date...
head to toe he's filled with self-respect, so guess I'll break his pride...
I snap em' and break his neck, he's hollow, I knew he was fake inside...
In your case it's like I got leprosy, because this emcee you can't touch...
I'm like a computer thats a little too powerful, I'm a bit too much...
heroin addict, the scars up your arm are the best tracks you've made...
Slash? who are you kiddin', your like a knife that lacks the blade...
like I was just coming off a diet its time for me to end this fast...
slap u with a book, face the facts, ur not smart enough to attend my class...

aight nice spit
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hmmm...........this forum gets mad slept on LoL......
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i would have to say idyLLic got dis one his flow was better, he had better punches, good battle though both o yall...


hit up dis plz.............

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104412

Punches: Idyllic
Multis: Idyllic
Wordplay: Idyllic
Metas: neither
Creativity: Tie
Flow: Tie

Vote - Idyllic

heroin addict, the scars up your arm are the best tracks you've made...
Best line of the battle, wordplay, decent punch

could we get some poll votez?
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damn yo idyllic took this shit

slash got a lil cocky and came kind weak here

"I'm like a computer thats a little too powerful, I'm a bit too much"(my favorite line)

vote: idyLLic

ayo check my sig for a few open battles i got that need some votes .................................................. .................................................. ...........